New friendship poem, 1 for 4

i will do it, if you please comment and vote on my BUT THAT TIME and PLEASE

but please don't down vote it cause many ppl already did that.

yours done.

Finished!-unbelievably amazing poem!!!

Please r/r/c on my latest poem ''The Lake'' and whatever other ones you want to. You dont have to do four though!

Thanks in advance!!

Done

Could you do..

Distorted thoughts
A story of war
Here we are
and
My declaration

Thanks:)

Ok I comented you...you can do any of the ones that have zero comments....I know it is sad....

Alright I check ur poem out but the site wont let me comment... so I'm commenting here=D

It was very nice, very emotional! I would say use more Periods and Commas to give it a nice flow and rhythm, so the reader knows when to stop and go lol. And it just makes it look nicer. But other then that it was very well writtin! I enjoyed it very much!

If u would be so kinda as to check out my poem *A True Friend Slips Away...* And any others u think sound interesting. Thank you very much!

~+Megan+~

Done!..

Umm, could you read my featured poems.
Thanks :)

done :) two my two newest and any others thanks :)

Thanks Jessy!.. loved the comments :)

I like your comments aswell Jessy. =P

They make me smile. =D Lol