Constructive Criticism - I'll r/r/c for nothing in return.

CLOSED! I'M DOING NO MORE NOW!

I'm in the mood to give some honest comments. I'll comment on anything from one to three poems. Leave no more than three names of poems you want commented on, and I'll choose which ones, and how many I'll r/r/c.

If I don't get it done tonight, I'll do it by tomorrow (as I plan to go to bed soon).

If you want to check out my work, then fine, but you don't need to RRC any of my poems in exchange.

Be warned though, I will be honest, and give constructive criticism.

EDIT: If you do want to return the favour, please comment on Indifference (To The World), but like I said, you really don't have to.

I'm done Brianna. :o)

I'm going to bed now, as it's quite late, but anyone else leave the titles, and I'll get on to it in the morning. x

"A Letter From Your Soul"
"It's The Inside That Counts"
and
"Dear Old Friend Of Mine"

Please and thanksya muches in advance :)

~BJ~

Hey! Can you please do:

You're My Everything, My World[song]
and
Like A Rose

Thanksss!! =]

Cayce x

yeah that's kool, i've been looking for some honest, constructive criticism.
could u plz do:

- perfect world, perfect end
- truth divine
- Death of the living dead.

thanks!

can you just pick any of my newer ones.
please and thank you!

Ravyn

I've done all of the above.

Is there anyone else?

Yeah like Brianna, you've already done two of mine but, I just wrote a new one too. I would really like an honest comment. Can you do it please? If you can it's called She Couldn't Tell The Truth. Thankss!! =]

Cayce x

Done and done.

Please comment on:

Fragile girl
Lost
Slipping away

Thank you so much in advance =0)

any of mine would be great thanks and honest is good dont say you like it if you dont :d
xxALLYxx

I've done two for each of you.

Anyone else?!?

oooooooooooh MEEEEEE!!!!!!
Could you do my newest one "Your Love for Me"
Thanks! I'll return the favor as soon as I get the chance!

How Do You Find The Words

and, if you still want to,

How Do You Want To Die?

thanks a mill

//T.L.//

I've done them. :o)

If you're still doing some, can you do mine too?
Any of them is fine, and could use all the criticism I can get.

I'm going to bed again, but like yesterday, leave the titles, I'll get onto them tomorrow morning. :-)

And Heather, yes I am. I'll do one or two of yours now, instead of the morning, as you asked before I posted.

Thank you :)

Can you PLZ read

My New Found Friend
Just to make you Proud
Stuck

Thankyou

ohh.. Thanks :) I commented on your newest one! it was really good!

if you could read any of my poems and offer some constructive critisism I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks! ^_^

Please give me some real constructive cristisim on........life vs I, rose colored glasses, and here I AM!

tHANK YOU SO MUCH!

Ok, I've done a couple of poems from all of you.

I'm not doing anymore now though. Sorry. x