Honest Feedback On Offer!!!

Post up to two titles below and I'll give totally HONEST constructive criticism on your poetry (looking at content and poetic form etc.)

Please don't ask me to comment on cliche teen angst or teen love poetry because you probably will not appreciate my response.

I wouldn't say no to the favour returned on my own work.

Thanks.

Thankyou, if you could please critique

"Child of the Night"
and
"Free"

It would be greatly appreciated any advice of improvement you can give.

Thanks for sharing BrokenMisery.

Thank you very much for all your help! Its hard to get honest critiques these days!

I would appreciate some honest, constructive feedback...

Can you please let me know what you think about my poems called:

Lost Spirit
Only A State Of Mind

Thankx...i am no expert but i would love to reeturn the favor...do you have any specific poems you would want me to read? Let me know!

Laura,
I have just commented on 'Lost Spirit' but it appears I have read 'Only A State Of Mind' before so is there another poem you would like me to comment on?

If you wish to return the favour please do so on my most recent write/s. Thanks.

can you read my poems?
Red

And

Hate

any other that interests you...i jus appreciate the feedback!! thanx it does help alot...

i will get to your tomorrow...i have a lil note to remind me so iwon't forget...thanks again much appreciated.

Actually, I'd like you to look at a love poem - and I did write it over two years ago when I was 16 - so yeah, teen love - I'll appreciate you're response though. Even if you hate it - give me your worst. I can take it. :oP

It's called: Inside My Heart

If you do want to do another, then do Rag Doll.

And be brutally honest. Don't sugarcoat anything.

Thank you in advance.

I would be very grateful if u could read *I Miss You... * and *A True Friend Slips Away...* No they r not... teen love poems (Except for the love of a friend lol) I would greatly appreciate it, thank u ever so much!=D

Hey

could you do :

Night Terrors

and

A war story

Thanks alot

--Steph

yeah id really appriciate some honest comments on
*crying from the eyes and bleeding from the heart*
and
*with love from a friend who cares*
if you hate them feel free to say so i wont be offended
thanks
xxALLYxx

Thanks for your comments. You've honesty makes the poems that I know are good stand out from the ones that aren't so great. I wish more people would be as honest as you.

Thanks again. x

could u comment on

Wanted
and
A Lost Songbird

theyre my two most recent ones...but not my best ones, they could do with some improvement so any help would be appreciated!

thanks silver j but u mustv misread my poem...the stanza u commented on in 'wanted' actually reads 'need not reply' not 'apply' like u said...u mustv misread it, just thort id let u know :)

the tale of a werewolf
the night that i died

theyre both on my featured...thanks

Please rate Until and Gone

Please r/r/c
"And So I`ll Be Seeing You"
and
"The Beauty Of Music"

Thanks,
Sam Hollywood

can you please do
despiration
what has come of this world

Please and thank you
~~Sweetie