worst deal ever! but dont be sorry if u didnt open it ;)

if you read,vote, and comment on:

"Deep in your eyes" you would get 10 votes,comments in return

dont wanna miss it at all!

Done! Nice poem!

done some of your poem, keep writing! have a great day!

it was a good poem!

done

I commented, Please r/r/c on any of my latest 10 thanks! im gonna read more of yours

Nicely done.
I left an honest critic comment on there, I hope it helps, and if it makes you feel bad, I'm really sorry. But it shouldn't.
I left a slightly longer comment than the rest, but I think it compares if you rate 10 of my poems.

Since you've done a lot of my poems, pick whatever you want...I hope that's ok.
If you can do:
-You Don't Know Me
((If you do that one, you can do only 6 or 7 more.. It's uber long.))

Thanks tons!

xDarkSuicidex

ok...i'll get right to it...um could you do my 2 latest and any on my featured? thanks.

♥JeSS♥ ~Squiggle Master~

Sorry i took a long time to comment but i usually use the internet at my school most of the time! i did 10 of your poems

Erica

Ironic Dreams: Done
The World's Greatest Teachers: Done
Why?: Done
Never again : Done
Alone : Done
Time : Done
Forever Beginning: DOne
To move : dOne
Raccoon Creek : Done
Running out: Done

Deal Closed!!!!

жshadowspoetж

Reason to live: Done
Beginning of forever : DOne
How i wish : DOne
For my mother: DOne
Maiden fair: Done
Mylove letter to andrea : Done
A father's love :Done
Life is precious : Done
Before you: done
Your heart will never tell lies.: Done

Deal Closeddddd!!!

Hey ive done it, well done!
could you please comment on my 8 newest and
-Perfect little girls suicide story
&
-She Died With Bloody perfection

Thanks and love
Mel

Esther

Teaser : done
Flowers: Done
The school Spell: Done
Leaving Song! : done
Killing: Done
Friends! : Done
School!: Done
I don't LOVE you!: Done
Cheat : Done
Work!!! / Regret!!: Done

Deal closed!

thanks!

Robie, thank you very much for reading mypoem, i really appreciated...

goran

How Can I {Tetractys}: Done
What Else You Killed : Done
I Was Your Life : Done
My Birthday {Acrostic}: Done
My Last Message To The Rude Girl Once I Loved{Acrostic}

Goran there is no more poems for me to read! i read all your poems and loved them all keep it up!
thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me!

Deal closed!

I r/r/c on it I think I only got 9 poems....it would be nice if you would r/r/c them all

hi robie I read it and another one too!

if you could read my poem Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call Me Beautiful it's long but it's my fav..If you like it pass it around to others who can comment on it!

tnx!

Alright your name looks oober familar ... but bare with me i dont want to go through all mah poems to see if you've done them :) i'll read ur poem and you said 10.... k here they r:

1.Warped and Twisted
2.Darkness Of Hell
3.Angel of Darkness
4.Angel of Fire
5.Song of Death
6.Death's Mistress
7.Forbidden Love
8.Death.
9.Death (Part Two)
10.Trapped In Time

Thanks Babe.

alright, i read your poem. You can read any 10 of mine. Thanks!

TheRavensGhost

Unawakened: Done
A Past Revisited: Done
Just Go!: Done
Over the Edge : Done
Slipping Away: Done
It's All Over: DOne
Fleeing Within: Done
Lost : Done
The Man in the Alley: Done
Gossip : Done

Deal closed!!!

sorry everyone if i am taking so long to r/r/c on your poems! but i am doing the best i can to finish all the poems!!! thanks for your patients!

Black+White

Breaking point: Done
Dying without a care: Done
End of the Road : Done
My Shining Star: Done
Fractual Time: Done
Left Alone: Done
Within: Done
Unexplainable Love: Done
Mental Breakdown : Done
Uncertain Fate : Done

Deal Closed!!!

xDarkSuicidex

1.You Don't Know Me: Done
2.My Plan : Done
3.Kiss Me One Last Time : Done
4.Your Hearts Desires: Done
5.Your End : done
6.For You To Come Along.. : Done
7. My Kryptonite: done
8. Feeling What They May : done
9. Pain Beneath My Chest(JournalEntry4): done
10. Harassment : Done

sorry i took so long! but i am trying my best to do it fast and all! thanks for your patients!

Alright, done...it was a really good poem=)

Can you please do :

"Lies"
"Her Game of Life"
"Remember?"
"Suicide of the Heart"
"Her Daily Shower"
"Hidden World"
"Our Love"
"Who am I?"
"The Last Diary Entry"
&&
"He Did This"

Thankyou sooo much=)

Can you just do these

Blind Pursuit
Just Friends
Treasure
Just Doesn't Make Any Sense
Denial
Hide The Pain

Done! Could you just do my latest 5 please?

~*~fallen~*~angel~*~

The Object Of Your stares: Done
A Message Of Hope: Done
What You've Done To Me (lyrics): Done
The Night Sky: Done
Just Let Me Be Me (lyrics) : Done
The Night That I Died : Done
Too Late: Done
Silent Suffering : done
You Don't Care : Done
My Guardian Angel : Done

sorry i took so long!!! thanks for ur patients!

-*I*Tried*-

1. Perfect little girls suicide story: Done
2. She Died With Bloody perfection: Done
3. Never known : Done
4. Pain: Done
5. R.I.P. (ex) My Best Friend: Done
6. You were Strong, He Was Stronger (abuse) : Done
7. Engulfed in Pain: Done
8. Lost Childhood: Done
9. Barbie in The Window : Done
10. Deaths Tools : Done

Sorry i took so long but i am trying my best to cope! thanks for your patients!

Marcus

1. Denial : Done
2. Hide The Pain: Done
3. Just Doesn't Make Any Sense: Done
4. Untitled1: Done
5. Treasure: Done
6. Hide The Pain (Alternative Ending) : Done
7. Just Friends : Done
8. Blind Pursuit: Done
9. Her Father : Done
10 Art For The Heart: Done

Thanks for your patients

*ciao bella*

1.Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call
Me Beautiful: Done
2. You Want Her; I Can Be Her: Done
3. Midsummer Magic : Done
4. Lost : Done
5. Cold Under The Pile Of Tears: Done
6. The Emptiness of Things: Done
7. I Want You, My True Love : Done
8. My Addiction: Done
9. Love Me (Cinquain) : DOne
10. Searching For A New Chance At Life : Done

Thanks for your patience

Going through all these poems is going to take you forver.

I r/r your poem, not altogether bad

I only have nine poems up so do those if you ave the time.

well it is taking me forever, cos i have exams, and study so i read 10 everyday, sure i will read rate ur poems now!

i read all your poems!

Brittney Schmelter

1.Warped and Twisted: Done
2.Darkness Of Hell: Done
3. Angel of Fire: Done
4. Angel of Darkness: Done
5. Song of Death: Done
6. Death's Mistress: Done
7. Forbidden Love: Done
8. Death. : Done
9. Death (Part Two): Done
10.Trapped In Time: Done

Lexie

1. Best Friends: Done
2. A Friendship Falling Apart: Done
3. How the Past is Never Forgotten: DOne
4. Some Things Never Change: DOne
5. One Of These Days: Done
6. One Mistake: Done
7. Forgiveness: DOne
8. Love or Lust?? : Done
9. The Perfect Day : Done
10. A Vanished Friend : Done

Done!

Fetusboy

1. trainOFthought : Done
2. The Scars Remain: Done
3. Splintering : Done
4. Through the Gauntlet of Dreams: Done
5. standard operating procedure: Done
6. And Darkness Fell: Done
7. Purity: Done
8. The Way You Are, Instead : Done
9. A Thousand Days of Anguish : Done
10. Be Not Downcast, Oh My Soul: Done

Deal Closed

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are u sure only ur latest 5?
anyway i would do them now :D

1. I Don't Have A Prince?: Done
2. Friends (Lanturne) : Done
3. Love (Lanturne): Done
4. Walking... : Done
5. My Mummy: Done

Done Did all 5 of your latest poems! right?!

thanks robie :)

My.Love.4.u.is.endless

1. Lies: Done
2. Her Game of Life: Done
3. Remember?: Done
4. Suicide of the Heart: Done
5. Her Daily Shower: Done
6. Hidden World: Done
7. Our Love: i couldnt find this poem
8. Who am I?: Done
9. The Last Diary Entry:
10. He Did This: Done

Thanks for your patiece!
Deal Closed:P