want comments?

  • Haven
    19 years ago

    anyone want comments? I'll do up to 5 of your poems:D just post them hear or read one of mine and put them in a comment! either way works

  • Haven
    19 years ago

    I'm on it!!!!

  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    You can do:
    Forbidden Love
    Trapped In Time
    Death.
    Death (Part Two)

    Since Death n Death 2 r long I'll count them as 3 :)

    Thanks Babe!

  • Live, Laugh, Love
    19 years ago

    Hey I read "Over for now" amazing poem People should go check it out
    Could you please read
    "untitled"
    "THe next poem I write" I wrote it for school
    "A shattered Heart"
    and if you want to read another two go ahead. Thanks hun

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok the following would be groovy.
    "Idol-F***ed" (it's spelled the right way though)
    "The Hang-Woman"
    "The Requiem of the Care Bears"
    "Perfection"
    "The Seams of Love"
    I'll return the favor, just tell me the poems you'd like reviewed in one of the comments.

  • Haven
    19 years ago

    ok I just woke up!!!! but I'm on it!!!

  • AshLetitia
    19 years ago

    I have r/r/c on a couple of your poems, wonderful job.

  • Haven
    19 years ago

    just saying, my ex is also commenting on some of yours, so if you get double up you know why!

  • Robie Lincer
    19 years ago

    could you please r/r/c on :

    I Love You, I Love You So...
    Why do u do this?
    Only You...
    Baby call me anything you want...
    Your eyes...

    Thanks in advance!!!

  • Mark
    19 years ago

    Um.. could you RRC on.. Pie, Pie #2 and 3 of your choice, please!

    Thanks =)