Unique *USE THIS LINE* Contest!!!

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1. Melinda Smith
2. Lush. Fcuk-
3. JPoet
4. The ectasyofsuicide
5. Who cares

Can we use multiple lines in the poem, but base it off one?
I really like these lines and want to use them:
2. The heavens wither at the touch of my hand
5. Summer is killed by the fall of my soul
6. You live like you're dying, hiding from the sun

They all kind of relate...So, can I use them all? They're such good lines! If not...Then...I would have to take
*2. The heavens wither at the touch of my hand..
xDarkSuicidex

((Nice contest by the way.))

7. Between me and my reflection, whom do you love

Can I please have a spot on that one? =]

-Jenna.

#9 please that has got to be the coolest line ever.

Darksuicide, you can only use one of these line

Gaining Control
By: Twisted Heart

Paint the walls, fight again, I'm past the point of self control
No longer one to cower down to your heartless fists, so cold.
I've done it, now, I've left the mark, upon the bed we shared
Too many times I came home and found you in a stupor there.

Your tainted words have caused me grief for many lonely nights
But now I can't hear them echoing over the sirens and the lights.
The house in blazes, here I stand, silently outside the gate
Waiting for the flames to die and the coroner to take you away

Just charred and blackened ashes,like your heart and soul
Finally some satisfaction, as I feel you loosen your hurtful hold.
No longer will your words and fists, rebound inside my mind
I inhale the burnt smoke's umbers as they fade with time.

My neighbor takes me to the station, a statement I must sign
It was a cigarette you smoked, and with whiskey spilt combined
Was I there, I was at work, at least that's what they think
And this black eyes, the end result, of falling against the kitchen sink.

No longer happy pictures of our love built by deceit
I no longer have to make excuses, for your death has set me free
When asked to make arrangements, to lay your soul to rest
I'll gladly bare the full expense, for my freedoms worth the best.

If I have thoughts of conscience, don't think they're all for you
I've suffered all these many years for the pain you put me through
But sometimes, I regret the fact, that now I have become
A soul that's trapped inside a heart that's built for only one.

Keep it up

Ok, ok. Only #2 then.. Fine. Be that way. =] Haha, just playing with you, deary.

I should have it by Sunday. XD

xDarkSuicidex

I've Woken To Find Myself In The Shadows Of The Past
by: Ciao♥

I've woken to find my self in the shadows of the past
Hardly realizing that this, somehow, won't last

So I make the best of it, and try to find you
I try to go back to the times before we were through

I flash through the memories and remember them all
Everything up to the moment that I would fall

But I don't dwell there, instead at the happier times
I remember the moment that you were finally mine

How happy a day, the memories come in clear
Those were the times I had nothing to fear

Then that fateful December day, the day we kissed
How I would never forget this

Then the times I swore not to relive
I couldn't do it, I just couldn't give

So I went back to the happy ones of you
I walked through them, one by one, my smile grew

I remember the way your cologne would smell when we would hug
I remember the way I would teasingly, be a big bug

I remember the way I would help you with your work
I didn't think it was much of a job, more like a perk

I look back on the days we would spend together
I can't believe that this is not forever

You told me something so long ago
I promised to treasure our love and let it grow

Distance makes the heart grow fonder
But to you, my mind will wander

No one can replace the way you could make me feel
That's a feeling that just has to be real

After some troubled times, you came back to me
But things were different, we were no longer a we

I hurt you bad and you hurt me too
But look at us now, we made it through

So when you come back to me sometime soon
I promise to celebrate your day in June

So as I lay down to sleep to come back home
I pray to God that you won't be alone

Just whisper my name and you know I'll hear
And just pretend that I'm somewhere near

So I waken from this vivid dream to see you standing here
I swear to God I thought you would never come back near

So as I embrace you, the memories join
Our souls and hearts finally rejoin

can i have

I've Woken To Find Myself In The Shadows Of The Past

please and thanks...i'll get started right away

[4] PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! thank you!!!! ahhh! i'll get onto it!

wow i actually finished it:P only took a couple minutes though but i like it :P anyways here is mine with the line: Ive woken to find myself in the shadows of my past.

I remember a time,
Ten years before the present,
A day when I was immoral,
A side of me I resent,

I was a slave,
To my own deceitful lies,
Its something that wont leave,
A side of my I despise,

I am now clean,
I cut no longer,
Ive stopped the urge,
And I have become stronger,

As I fall asleep,
I have a vision,
In this dream I cut,
And make a deep incision,

I realize I already woke,
This breath could be my last,
Ive woken to find myself,
In the shadows of my past,

I was a slave,
To my own deceitful lies,
Its something that wont leave,
A side of me which has become my demise

I wish i could think of something else for the second last stanza but nothing is coming to mind its just making me feel like its ruining the poem lol...if there are any suggestions please send them my way...but umm anyways theres my poem

Bump

7. Between me and my reflection, whom do you love

please

I've woken to find myself in the shadows of my past plz..
~Ashley Paul

The Shadows of My Past
By: Ashley Paul

My past wasn't so pleasant
Somethings I hoped would end fast
One time I thought it was over
but I've woken to find myself in the shadows of my past

Some how it came back to haunt me
many years ago
And thats not all that came back
In my heart, I could feel past pain drilling a hole.

This hole in my heart hurt ferociously
and slowed down my heart's beat
waking up in the mornings
I stand to my feet

Eager for the day to end
Praying to not be hurt
Hoping for my problems to decrease
Needing to stay alert.

The harder that I strive to forget my past
The harder it is to get away
I hope to someday value my life
when my past becomes today

And if my future changes again
And I don't want my life to last
I hope one thing will happen when I wake...
to find myself in the shadows of my past

***Comment on this poem in "my poems" section and tell me what you think of it.***

ill tak number 6]You live like you're dying, hiding from the sun ill try to get it done asap!

What is the deadline for this? I will try and get it in as soon as I can but I am getting really busy lately.

-Jenna.

I haven't decided the deadline yet.

Okay, well I'll try and write it in a few minutes and get it in later on tonight! =]

-Jenna.

5. please

hmm...i just noticed that 3 people have done Ive woken to find myself in the shadows of my past...r u judging all 3 or just going to use the first one?

oh nvm i see it...sorry

when is the contest ending?

Not for a while

hmm even though i already submitted one...can i submit another just for fun...cuz im really bored and the poem im doing is not going very far

nvm...i cant think of anything for the other titles so... lol ya

only 1 line per person lol

Me And My Reflection.

Crocodile tears streak down my wretched face,
As my ashen fingernails lightly trace,
Along my withering cheeks of porcelain,
Etching flaws out of my plastic barbie skin.

The rain trickles onto the window pane,
As I look upon my reflection in vain,
Secrets burn in my eyes of baby blue,
As my mouth tells the stories so untrue.

The shattered voices echo inside my head,
As I play back every lie I have ever said,
Wondering:between me and my reflection,
whom do you love in this imperfection?

© Jenna Elphick
October 17, 2006.

- - I don't like it, but I wrote it quickly and will probably be editing it. - -

-Jenna.

Great job!

{{Again, I am xDarkSuicidex}}

I just wanted to let you know that I will soon have my poem in, hopefully.. .I have been really, really busy. Thank you for waiting. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

yep i'm [you're acting like damn saint] so umm.....it will sort of take a while too......so srry..i'll try to get it done soon as possible!

can i reserve 10?:D

Sure

Woot..I tried a different rhyme scheme, I guess you could say..I hope you like it.
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The End of the World {The Heavens Wither At The Touch of My Hand}

The heavens wither at the touch of my hand,
Gods cry out, falling to my every command.
Thunderous applauds rupture the land,
Gods fall, crying to my command.

Twenty-thousand armies dance across the soil,
Over a puzzling decision they must toil.
Protecting their Gods' dashing royal;
Wonderous decisions they must toil.

Hitting the ground in rumorus praise,
Laughing about in mysterious ways.
Glancing around for these broken days,
For about mysterious laughs of simple ways.

One by one, deathly armies gladly take,
What was never theirs in this ending wake.
Yet, still they steal for their Gods' sake,
Never was it theirs in this ending wake.

The world crumbles, piece by piece,
The never ending love of Heaven cease.
The Gods of armies stand by a crease,
Of Heavens' end, the love will cease.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

any idea when this contest is gonna be over?

DREAM and FEEL

i dream what you're dreaming
i feel what you're feeling
but can you feel the hurt inside buried?
the dreams of you, how i want us to be badly married?
can you feel the actions how you treat me everyday?
the dreams i have i badly want to go away
feelings i want to just let it out
dreams i wish could happen, but that's a doubt

who knew you'll change that quickly?
and how you could just say BYE or OVER to me?
you weren't the guy i used to know
the guy who is now, is the one who let me go
i wish i didn't let this to happen
then i guess everything would be happy, and the sadness will end
i just wish i never met you
and not to hear the words said back to me "i love you too"

i'm you're acting like a damn saint.

sry i took so long i didnt remember reserving anything:P here it is

10 Darkness

Darkness surrounding, chocking in the black,
Can’t breathe, it burns, sending shivers up my back.
Smoke filling the air and my lungs, got to leave,
Trying to breathe air through the filter of my sleeve.

Fire burning my skin, continue to run,
Hard to believe earlier I was just having fun.
Light headed and woozy, reaching the front door,
Taking a deep breath, unknowing what’s in store.

Where’s my family? What about my pets?
Are they safe, or in the fiery deaths?
Call 911, firemen arrive in their big red truck,
Neighbors gathering around, but my family’s stuck!

The house is burning! “Hurry!” I shout,
They extinguish it, but not I cry and pout.
My family’s gone, the perished in the in smoke,
Where will I do now? In my tears I choke.

All that is left is to find someplace new,
Now that my life has been thrown askew.
Now I'm just waiting for the sun,
For we have no where to run…

~*Who Cares?*~

Ooh i like it:P

*edit*

NEVER MIND..... SORRY......My bad!

I am a newbie here but I would like to join in. I noticed there was no one assigned to #3 (Come dark light, shine into her deserted heart)
If you don't mind I would like that one.

Thanks, Kay