What is it? 2-1

I wrote a riddle poem and I will READ COMMENT AND RATE two of yours if you do that one for me

most poets guess love but I was thinking of something else when I wrote the poem ...can you guess?

Hello Micheal, I commented and voted for you, And I believe it is about Poetry written on paper.

Can you please do any 2 of your choice.

Thank you, Joe

As did I.

Now, it could be poetry, or perhaps simply words. Most likely it is poetry.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

wow..that was a fantastic poem..you should write more like it
could you please do:
"Remember"
&&
"Quiet Ocean"
Thankyou:)

Beautiful job

-Dark Dwellers
-Marry me, Your dead bride

done! please read these two:

Angry Temptations
This Star

I wrote this poem as a challenge for a riddle
The master poet that inspired the first line is Kahlil Gibran
Quote from The Prophet;
"People of Orphalese, beauty is life when life unveils her holy face.
But you are life and you are the veil.
Beauty is eternity gazing at itself in a mirror.
But you are eternity and your are the mirror"

It treads a razors edge that is mysteriously narrow
Was inspired by a line from Bob Dylan's "Shelter from the Storm" Beauty walks a razor's edge, someday I'll make it mine"

Dwelling in the passions of those that behold
This is the line I thought would give the riddle away inspired by the cliche Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder

It may often be shallow, or it may be very deep
Was inspired by the cliche "beauty is only skin deep"
Physical beauty is superficial and is not as important as a person's intellectual, emotional, and spiritual qualities.

But I understand how love can be perceived in terms of shallow, or deep

Some hear it in the melody of their favorite song
If you think of it fondly you cannot get it wrong

When I wrote this poem I was thinking of beauty. When most read this poem they thought of love
beauty
1 : the quality or aggregate of qualities in a person or thing that gives pleasure to the senses or pleasurably exalts the mind or spirit : LOVELINESS
2 : a beautiful person or thing; especially : a beautiful woman
3 : a particularly graceful, ornamental, or excellent quality
4 : a brilliant, extreme, or egregious example or instance
5 : BOTTOM