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  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Ok. Read my newest poem, 'How Perfect...' and I will return the favour. By however much you want. I will limit it to 10 poems for the deal. I am a busy person. =P MUST HAVES:

    `Titles-no titles, no comments.
    `No one liners-if I recieve a one liner from you, expect one in return.
    `I want critism. I want to improve this style, and I can't do that without critism.

    Thanks in advance. =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Done.
    Can you please do

    *My watery grave
    *Fake
    *Stay strong
    *You’ll get what you deserve
    *Something I never knew before
    *To all the people…
    *Hold up
    *The real girl inside
    *If you want this to be
    *You’re destroying my mind

    Thank you!
    xx

  • goddess-glamourpuss
    19 years ago

    Done

    Could you do *Bete Noir *
    *Catharsis*

    That would be great
    Thanx

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    Alright done:)
    could you please do:
    "Silent Murder"
    " Black Widow"
    " Language of the Dead"
    &&
    " Physical Attraction"

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Ok. Getting to work.

    Anyone else while I finish these up?

  • emmerz
    19 years ago

    hey i just read it! well...you wil see what i think of it in my comment:P lol( dont worry, its a good thing!)
    could you please comment on...**thinking**...

    the story behind her smile
    my intention
    love, your best friend
    making me fall
    you
    unforgettable
    memories
    the one who caught my heart

    yea...thats 8 for ya :) and honesty is MUCH appreciated!

    thanks a million!

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Tonight...I feel

    ThANK YOU!

  • xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx
    19 years ago

    Done!
    Could you do
    Fate
    Melting lasting love
    Lithiam
    Follow me
    Hating you
    and American Soldier

  • xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx
    19 years ago

    And um...god i had to check my poem list sorry =]
    Remains and
    You didn't know + Letters! Arigatou!

  • melly xx
    19 years ago

    done.

    1. Jesus Will answer

    2. Those Words

    3. C'mon Baby (explict)

    4. Fly Away

    5. Back to Reality

    6. Unbearable pain

    7.Sudden Darkness

    thanks a bunches =)

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Yes, Amanda I will. Don't worry. I have more than this site to look after and I'm very busy. I will get to it whenever I can.

  • ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~
    19 years ago

    done urs... very interesting, looking forward to reading more of urs....

    could u please do these of mine, wen u get the chance... thnx hunni

    1 Afraid to fall asleep
    2 EMPTY..
    3 I gotta be strong
    4 Hurt me
    5 Nightmare

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Ok. Don't worry. If your poems aren't done, they will be getting done ASAP.

  • dollwithafrown
    19 years ago

    Done. :)

    Whenever you have time, please comment on:

    "Looking Out My Window"
    "Mystery Life"
    "You're Not Alone"
    "A Better Way"
    and
    "Fight For Me"

    Thank you.

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    There you go hun. =]

    Could you please do:

    ` Beneath The Surface
    ` Revealing Bliss [Malisus]
    ` Glistening Skin [Parquette]

    If there are any more that catch your eye please do them aswell =]

    Thankss sweetie, xx.

  • ShootingStar179
    19 years ago

    I read Rejection.

    Please comment/rate/read

    All my poems. There are about six.

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    3 people left. =) I'll try to get them all done tomorrow, but no promises. However long it takes me, it'll take me. =) xoxo

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Finally done. =)

    Anyone else?