Writing Poetry for English Class

I have written a poem for my english class about Animal Farm and I got a 100 on it. But now, I have to write another one and it's about the Cherokee Indians and how they were on the Trail of Tears. I've already wrote it and I would like some input on how it is and if I should change anything or phrase words differently.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=787310 there's the link. honest opinions please.

very well written. Excellent. Wonderful. It makes me feel like someone is actually writing it from that time zone. 5/5!

Michelle

i commented, i hope it was too late.

i really thought it was good. way better than what i can do.