Quick, if you want a comment...!

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I'm in the mood to read and critique, so while I'm around why not take advantage of it.

    I will warn you now though, this offer is only on while I'm on this site today...because I will be busy for the rest of the week...

    Oh and I will be honest in my comments and may well give improvement suggestions, so if you only like sweet, unhelpful praise - walk away now.
    However, if you do want to improve and are open to reader ideas, post a title below. I won't be harsh, just honest.

    Thanks... now give me a title!

  • TravisInABottle
    19 years ago

    'Nightmares'.

    thanks. i'm in need. :]

    travis

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    My Abominable Memories

    Thanks :)

  • Edward D Zurovec
    19 years ago

    Woven Lovers
    Thanks

  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    Chaotic Mind... and if you've already read it .. Warped and Twisted

    Thanks Babe

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    Immortal Truth

  • Esther
    19 years ago

    erm...? please can u do my either 'I don't know what I did'

    Or

    'My Story;'

    I promise I will return the favour! lol!
    n same goes for any-one who wants to comment/rate them! but please don't too harshly!

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Thanks for the honesty Silver J.
    :)

  • dollwithafrown
    19 years ago

    "Little Cup of Death" -- thank you. :)

  • Esther
    19 years ago

    thanks! lol! it means alot! although i put the dead bit to like show that after what happened i wish i was dead n i would die lol!

  • Esther
    19 years ago

    but i still gotta say! i loved it anyway! it rules!!

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Lol still don't you think it's a bit melodramatic wanting to die after falling out with a friend... never mind hehe

  • Esther
    19 years ago

    it would be if it was a mate i wasn't close to but like a best friend? n this person was a boy, like n he is the nicest person eva! lol! so 4 him 2 do that is a really big thing!

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    "Language of the Dead"
    Thankyou

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    ...

  • Dacey Flame
    19 years ago

    Stilll here? I dont know the time difference....but if your still here could you do "Tragic Choices"
    Thanks =)