'My Call" and "Thanks for Spring"

Please read, vote and leave your critique, I in turn will do the same for your poems. Thanks!!!

both were great keep up the good work and thank u for helping me with them typo's thanks again steve

Done, Sorry my comments weren't longer, but I couldnt find anything to critique haha.

Could you please do:

How it died
and
Great about you

Thanks

--Steph

Hi Rachel,
I have read and commented all of your poems. What can I say It must run in the family. You write beautiful! Thinking of you! Aunt Cindy

Those are awsome poems

If you get time would you r/r/c
"Awards"
Also the hope that you spoke of in "My Call" reminded me of a miricle I witnessed about this time four years ago, when my sister was not expected to survive

please check out "BEE OF THE LAKE" a peom that I wrote then that is very dear to me

Rachel I have also read all your poems and they are awesome! Also Michael's The Bee of The Lake is beautiful!!!