|-1 for 4 Deal-|

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Heyy guys. I have a great deal for you all. r/r/c on my poem, 'Beneath The Surface' and I will return the comments/ratings by 4. MUST HAVES:

    `Titles-If there are no titles left, I will not bother reading any at all.
    `Votes-Please vote for it. If you think it's horrible and you want to downvote, please just leave it alone.
    `No one liners-If I recieve a one liner from you, expect to recieve some back. I want critique on this poem, and I could care less if you hurt my feelings.

    Thanks in advance. xoxo
    Samantha

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    okay, I'll do it, and i'll follow the rules, I am always honest!

    please could you do
    "The love (senryu)"
    "Nature's Kiss (Haiku)"
    "Buried Alive"
    "My flame keeps burning for you"

    thank you

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Done. I left comments and rated for all.

    Anyone else?

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    -For the One who Smiles
    -Ride of History
    -New Year Candles

  • lost in lovee
    19 years ago

    hey i liked it soo much! can u comment 'you wanna stop' 'sometimes its so hard' 'twinkle in your eye' you'll never love me' plz thankz

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Done.

    Anyone else?

  • Dark Kitten
    19 years ago

    I'm reading your poem right now, hon. You can comment on whichever of my poems catch your eye. Please and thank you. =D

  • Rachel RTVW
    19 years ago

    Done. Please r/r/c:

    "Picture in a Frame"
    "Bridges are Burned"
    "Trapped" and
    "Do You?"

    Thank you. I will check out your other work tomorrow.

  • Cattiebrie
    19 years ago

    I did read it, and I responded honestly, I hope thats ok. I enjoyed it, my comment is there. I hope you will be honest with me as well. WIl you please do Damaged, Dreams, Jello Tree and Embedded Sorrow. thanks!

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Done.

    Anyone else?

  • Lady Vengeance
    19 years ago

    ok, i'm up for it.

    -viva la revolution
    -this is the end
    -sweet whispers
    -truth divine

    i need some honest critique too plz. it would be greatly appreciated. thanku kindle

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Done.

    Anyone else?

  • Jenni
    19 years ago

    done! wow, that poem was splendid!

    Insert Desired Poem Title Here
    Summer Rain
    V.o.m.i.t
    Daddy's Little Girl

    thanks [:

  • mathiax
    19 years ago

    ill r/r/c too!!
    pls do the same with:
    missing someone
    i think i love you
    feeling weird
    need to be with you

    thnx appreciate it!XD!