hey just bored, will read and comment on some

I am just kicking around thought I would do some reading, i would really prefer freestyle, not to many rhyming please, you don't have to comment back for me, just if you feel like it and not too many at once please, just a couple..

Hay could u please do a few of my poems thanks I'll return the favour Karl Wild

Please r/r/c whichever ones that catches your eyes...

Thanks!

J. Lau

Hey Karl, I read three of them and commented for all. Enjoyed them overall. thanks!

ok thanks a lot - I'll return the favor in a little while I promise. take care Karl Wild

Hey J. Lau, I went and did two so far. I am going to read some more of yours in a bit.

My Corpse Will Not Stop Burning is done and voted and commented. I felt assaulted and battered, very very well done. I really like it, very strong and emotional.

On the other one, that touched me deeply, beautiful.. blessings

could you please vote and comment on:

hell house

hey! could u do jst which ever ones pop out at u! thx

Hey, I have a new one titled 'mother and daughter'. It does rhyme, it's very long as well, so i dont expect you to do it. I think it's good, but you may not, let me know what you think (if you get around to it). thanks.

pbw

all of mine are free style. anythings fine i dont really care which ones you read or what ever. the favor will more thank likely be returned. =] thanks.

what up. i'd like you to read " your soul screams why" or a distant goddess. thanx

Could you please do 'backdrop'

xx333

K closed til I catch up! going to do that now!