3 new but old

  • Kristina
    18 years ago

    i just posted 3 new poems, but they are actually really old. all 3 i wrote in 2004.
    i would like people to read, rate and comment on them and tell me if i have improved my writing skills since then.

    heres the deal:
    1 for 2
    2 for 3
    3 for 5

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  • Shae
    18 years ago

    Great poems!
    I did all 3.

    Can You r/r/c:

    "Give A Little Bit"
    "I Thought"
    "Daddy Please"
    "I Won't Close My Eyes"
    "How Could I Ask For More"

    Please & Thank You!
    ~Shae

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  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Please Do

    -Like Skeletons, we lived
    -Lost Dreamers

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  • Kristina
    18 years ago

    wow you all had really great poems!

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  • Kristina
    18 years ago

    anyone else?

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  • Kristina
    18 years ago

    ???

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  • kiesha
    18 years ago

    I r/c on two of yours. If you would look at any of mine, that would be great. Thanks and keep writing!

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  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    I looked at all three of them. Atleast read my latest two please. Then you may chose whichever ones after that to read.

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  • Jenni
    18 years ago

    i did two of them

    please r/r/c:
    Suicide
    Insert Desired Poem Title Here
    &
    Radio Talk

    thanks [:

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