FREEEEE!! constructive criticism!!!

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hey guys im in an awfully good mood!!! i dont know why. but i am. so im willing to constructively criticise anyone who want's it!!! you dont have to do anything in return but if you'd like i'd love to hear what you have to say. but its not required.

i'd appreciate if you left titles(up to 3). and i'll give an honest opinion.

idk how long im going to do this. i'll determine that after i start seeing how many people do this.

:D

LEAVE TITLES PLEASE!!!

oh! me first.

Suicide.

I wrote it when i was 13 & i am unsure if I want to change anything in it.

thanks!
if you want i'll do it for one of your poems [:

i'd appreciate that. :D any of my featured poems would be nice :D oh and you can leave 2 more titles if you'd like jenni..

Oh yay I love free lol, though i will still definitley return the favor. :]

If you could please do the first 3 featured.

Thanks

marcella

I'd LOVE it if you'd do any or all of my poems (I only have four BD ) I've just started writing and need some critiquing. Thanks so much!

Hmmm.

- Valentinite
- Destroy me one last time
- Zero

Thanks.

hey, i've been away from writing for a little while so a comment on my latest one, long overdue would be nice and i'll comment back when i can =)

Ok cool.
Please do:
Sweet Dreams
As You Walk
Solitude

have fun commenting.

Could you do

^Falling Short
^My Better Half
^You Never Knew(A Suicide Note)

Thanks.

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sorry people im just afraid im going to forget about it and im going to watch foooooootballlll

i'll try to make another one tomorrow or something because i enjoy reading your poems.

saweeeee

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