Impress Me

Ohh a challenge, is anyone game?

It's simple, give me ONE poem (on any subject, any form) that will impress me.

Tip - cliche does not impress, nor does predictable rhyme, lack of flow, and poor spelling...

I'll leave honest comments and only vote if you ASK ME to.
It may earn you a place in my favourites.

Purpose of this post -
I want to see the poetry cream on this site. I'm curious...and I'm sure there are many great writes that I haven't stumbled across, yet.

So go on, show me your talent!

HappIness is HAving ThE oppourunitY tO love yoU

I wrote that today, i was/am angry with someone I thought was my friend. my best friend in fact.

thanks

>.<

:)

Hmm..I don't think my poems are that good, but I do appreciate honest comments. Could you please read:

"The Performance"
OR
"Her Infinite Solace"

Please and thank you!

the love thorn, and through my reflection. Please comment and vote. Thanks

You can read mine friends in death or sad mans pain or blacksmiths daughter =)

"no other way",this thing to my daddy,you can rate it too if you have time
-Thanks alot
Laura

Lol it's so hard to pick one....

I'll have to say:

Never a Careless Girl.

Thanks!!

If you're still doing this:

Make Me Perfect {Kyrielle Sonnet}

Enjoy.
And thank you for reading it.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

To those who left more than one title - I did the first title listed in your request.

Come on, is that all you've got?

I'm ready for more....

Life is a pleasant dream

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=777509

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=841224

if it doesnt impress you it'll offend you XD

Ok, all done...

Anyone else?

I loved your comment.. So I'm back. I'm here to baffle you. I hope I win. =] Haha.
But, this time I'll return the favor. Promise. =]
If you do:

Capture.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=822805

It's a cliche ending, yet maybe not.. Depends on how you read it, really. I really ask you to read this because it's been downvoted three or so times and I'm so curious as to why... Maybe you could help?
Thank you in advanced.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

20/20 It's a song but I hope it's not done cliche :S

There you go.

Anyone else game?

Erotic Bliss [Acrostic]

And I just want to say, you leave the best [honest] comments. i appreciate this offer very much.

marcella

Silver J--
I appreciate your comments more than anyone's. You make sense and aren't mean about it. =] Lol.
Thank you so much for commenting mine... Now, what can I comment for you?

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Silver J, had a look at your writing, excellent. I found it very intricate and really original, free from cliches. I just wanted to give ya a shout out, and say great writing, have a good one.

Tell me what you think of "Desires"... Please r/r/c also.

Thanks!

J. Lau

'They Tell Me'. I think you would appreciate it, but then again, I could be wrong. Anyway, Its the only one I'm really proud of that doesn't have all the lovey-dovey or depressed cliches and stuff, like you said. Thanks.

So Far Away

or

Tell Me You Love Me One More Time {Lyrics}.

I'd rather you pick So Far Away. It's my best poem!

A Beautiful Look at Death