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ok like it says, ill do four of yours if you read, rate, comment my newest poem "Wishing You Were Mine" but i need honest critique, no one liners, MUST LEAVE TITLE OF POEM(S) YOU WANT ME TO DO, I WONT DO IT WITHOUT THIS!

NO POEMS OVER 32 LINES! sorry but i have a very short attention span, and this is a short poem!

FOLLOW ALL RULES IF YOU WANT A RETURNED FAVOR
first ten only!!!

i did it.. great job!

can you please r/r/c

- away from you
- trapped within life
- she lives only in winter
- teasing to please

Ill do it.

=]

oops i did it already. xD

lol,
and im done with becca.

Anyone Else?

done...could you please rrc?
-erase my life as you erase my pain
-my valentine,my love
-no other way
-somewhere
Ps.please don't forget to vote them and i'll be thankful for you
Thanks alot
See ya
Laura

Please do "Damask Rose"
and if you want to "Fairground," "Sober Notions," and "Purple"

Thanks.

done:)
could you please rr&c :
"Maroon"
"My Hero"
"Loser"
&
"language of the dead"

..out of all those "my hero" is the logest..but it has 32 lines so i dont know if thats too long for you...

Done, Maybe you can read my poems now as I have featured them,
Little Bar Eyes
Just Us Dads
WOE
Thank You

done, please read.

Suicide
Static Radio
Mistletoe: Oklahoma's State Flower
&
Coffee Kiss