The Cave 1 for 2

Okay so I wrote a new poem. It's not a rhyming one like I usually write. I'm not sure if I like it or not. I need some honest opinions. So if you guys could leave me a comment telling me how you like it and it it's good that would be great.

Like the title says 1 for 2.
-No love poems or friendship poems. (It won't let me comment on them for some reason)

Thank you! =]

Anyone..?

i read it, great job.

please read,
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thanks!

I'm sorry Jenni as I said in my post I can't comment on love or friendship poems. Would you like me to leave the comments in the post or do two different ones?

quick question. when you go to a poem in teh love category, does it say something like, "if you want to post a comment please register?"
if yes, have you looked in the right hand corner & seen the login? because that has happened to me before.

if no, then just pick any poem two you can [:

Yes, it does say that. Then I log in again and go back it still says you need to login or register. I don't know what to do. I'll go comment your other poems though. =]

Well you did my poem called ' Played Heart' n I already did your poem called The Cave.

So if you have time can you please comment my newest poems

-I Lost You

&&

-Devil's Game

Okay I did them. I really love your poems.

can you read and comment 'I Am' ?

I'll check yours out and comment right now ;)

Dooone! =]