1 for 2, 2 for 3 etc... (Honest feedback)

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone.
    Ive got this new poem called "The Allurement Of The Knife ". And i want HONEST feedback on it.

    If you do anymore of my poems ill do more of yours.
    1 for 2,
    2 for 3,
    3 for 4 etc...

    Remember honest comments, NO oneliners, and ways to improve are allways welcome! Ill get to your poems ASAP, with honest feedback.

    Thanks in advance!
    xx

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Can you please do
    "Damask Rose"
    "Sharing"

    Thanks.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Please do my two newest ones.

    thanks

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    O and can you link me it or add it to your favorites, i cant read it. i cant get to it.

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    ¤Kitty¤
    Hears the link:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=844663

    I also have the same problem, cant read the latest poems, only the favourites.
    Oh and could you please give me the links to both of your poems as well?

    Silver J
    DOne both of yours, they were amazing! Thanks for comment.

    Anyone else?

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone else in??

  • amoxi
    18 years ago

    ok ill do urs can u please do
    *scars
    *ground zero
    *the end
    *my final moments
    thanks

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    amoxi

    Done all of them. Great. Thanks for all of your comments! xx

    Anyone else in?

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Hey.

    The two poems are in my favorites, so you should be able to get it.

    Tell me waht you think. It's so odd that I got massivly downrated. I don't know where it came from. Stinks.

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Kitty and Kristen both done. The ywere excellent reads. Thanks for your comments!
    xx

    Anyone else in?