1 for 2, 2 for 3 etc... (Honest feedback)

Hey everyone.
Ive got this new poem called "The Allurement Of The Knife ". And i want HONEST feedback on it.

If you do anymore of my poems ill do more of yours.
1 for 2,
2 for 3,
3 for 4 etc...

Remember honest comments, NO oneliners, and ways to improve are allways welcome! Ill get to your poems ASAP, with honest feedback.

Thanks in advance!
xx

Can you please do
"Damask Rose"
"Sharing"

Thanks.

Please do my two newest ones.

thanks

O and can you link me it or add it to your favorites, i cant read it. i cant get to it.

¤Kitty¤
Hears the link:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=844663

I also have the same problem, cant read the latest poems, only the favourites.
Oh and could you please give me the links to both of your poems as well?

Silver J
DOne both of yours, they were amazing! Thanks for comment.

Anyone else?

Anyone else in??

ok ill do urs can u please do
*scars
*ground zero
*the end
*my final moments
thanks

amoxi

Done all of them. Great. Thanks for all of your comments! xx

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Anyone else?

Hey.

The two poems are in my favorites, so you should be able to get it.

Tell me waht you think. It's so odd that I got massivly downrated. I don't know where it came from. Stinks.

Kitty and Kristen both done. The ywere excellent reads. Thanks for your comments!
xx

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