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  • amoxi
    18 years ago

    r/r/c my new poem 'Too Young' with honest comments on how i can make it better or whatever, more than one line and i will do 5 of your poems
    leave your titles!

    **i cant read explicit or slang poems

    thanks!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Done Hun.

    Please do my newest 5?

    Thanks.

    Bri [x]

  • David
    18 years ago

    i did. i gave you a 5. nice poem. so sad to hear that your cousin died tho. sigh.

    could you do:

    battle
    colour of life
    pride
    music
    10:41 Pm

    thanx so much. looking forward to your comments. and votes. lol

    David

  • Brittney Follett
    18 years ago

    Okay I'll do yours now. Can you please do:

    1. Too Far

    2. Footprints

    3. Do I Know You?

    4. Chaotic Mind

    5. You Have My Heart

    Merci Cheris
    Thanks Babe ;)