Show me what you got

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    Show me a good SAD POEM and preferably that is not about love or someone cutting themselves please.....
    Just 1... the BEST one that you want to share..

  • dollwithafrown
    18 years ago

    I suppose you could try "My Sister's Keeper".

    :)

  • BeautifulDisaster
    18 years ago

    My new poem "Are You Happy Now?" idk if it is what you are looking for, but my friends think that if it is really true i should be back in the psych ward....

  • Normal is the Watchword
    18 years ago

    I read what you wrote on another thread. I think I got it right. Do you want some real comments because I know you're not asking here but I'm willing to give you some helpful hints :)

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    Haha you dont have to ask for my permission... I do put them out so that you can read and coment them if you feel like it =)
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    And Ive read the above, some were pretty good but still Im not as sad as I should be... MAKE ME CRY SOMEONE PLEEESSS!!!!!

  • Normal is the Watchword
    18 years ago

    ha good luck trying to find a good sad poem and let me know if you find one that makes you cry. I'd wanna read it.

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    Nah Im still possitive, someone must have something to put a frown on this very very happy boys face...

    IT HURTS TO BE THIS HAPPY PEOPLE HELP ME OUT HER !!! =D

  • Normal is the Watchword
    18 years ago

    You can try my poem: Reflection. I think my explict ones are the sadder ones if people get their meaning about loss of innocence and abuse. Only reason why they are there is because of their depeer meaning of that.

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    Well you have the lead so far. Ive read some of them and you have a very interesting way of writing. I will check out more of your work tomorow since its realy late now and if I do not get my sleep I might hurt some innocent people...

    Also I will look through the other poems of the people above since I suspect that you nominated your most recent and not the best sad poems..

    keep em coming people I will see them tomorrow but for now good night =)

  • ShootingStar179
    18 years ago

    "Never a Careless Girl"

    Check it out. Thanks. :)

  • oldthings
    18 years ago

    Numb is my favorite sad poem of mine...

    buuuut, theres also i hate myself.. which is more recent... and i always have trouble judging my own work... but yes.. those two are pretty sad i do think.. read em and tell me what you think if you have the time =D

  • ellewen
    18 years ago

    to stop the rain

  • MemoirsOfMe
    18 years ago

    "Just Another Disappointment"

    Thanks.

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=807811

    Thankss, xx.

  • Perfection
    18 years ago

    Still happy guys cmon... =)

  • ShootingStar179
    18 years ago

    To Write is to Heal.

  • SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
    18 years ago

    Please Read my new poem

    Rotting to the core

    thanks