Want Feedback?

I'll be honest. Giving both praise where it's due and suggestions for improvement.

ONLY leave (up to 2) titles here if you won't yell at me for leaving my honest opinion.
I only say this because I've had an problem with this matter recently.

Part of writing and sharing on a site like this, is being able to accept diverse opinions (that's what all comments are). And take on board suggestions and ideas from the readers point of view, without spitting out your dummy lol.
If you agree, leave me some titles....

Furthermore, feel free to return the favour on my work (this isn't compulsary.)

Be My Endless Love
&
Promises.

I definitely agree with you here :]

Thanks, darlin'.

Hi SilverJ !

Could you please leave me a comment on my poems;

'Blood Instead of Ink'
and
'Bloody Reflection'

Just curious as to know if it's fine the way it is, or if there is something I could or should change! Thanks, I will return the favour with honest comments too : )

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=863354

The Key to Immortality (Even When I am Gone...)

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=779528

I Never Will Forget You (Extremely Long)

and if you've already read one of those:

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=776059

I Wish I Could Forget You (I Know I Never Will)

Thanks dear. Scrutinize and demolish my poetry with criticism!

I just wanted to thank you for your honest opinions. Not a lot of people are completely honest. they just go & say ''great job. i loved it''. But, thank you very much. It's much appreciated, hun.

Bri [x]

The Vivd Eye:
To The Daughter's Misery:

Both marked explicit for their underlying message. I'd tell you but that might ruin whatever you see.

I will be sure to read a couple of yours...pls read
*Beauty of the roses
&
*Hiding From Reality
Thanx

Could you please do ::

` Flutter To Freedom
` Eternally In Love With You

Thankss so much hunni, xxx.

to stop the rain please~!

Silver you seem to be well known on this site.. I have a question since a person told me you might be able to help me out. I am sorry for being off topic and if you get too angry we can have a nice duel or something =D (oh god Im halarious)...

Anyways I sometimes enjoy writing and mostly it is stories. I try to make sad stories but the problem is that in a sad story the ending must be very strong from what I have figured so far. And this is my problem I guess... So what can I do to improve my saaad endings and make you people cry more =) ?

Done those.

Perfection, I'll answer your question in a personal message (email).

Anyone else want comments?

I do. I haven't read your work in a while, I need to read a couple.

I really don't know what I want you to read. Uhmm. At least Eternal Bliss, and whichever catches your attention.

Thnks. I apprciate the comments, I wouldn't mind some rates if you want to.

SILVER J is one of the best poets I know. She is an amazong writer who is kind and honest.

and yea, sorry about that. I just needed to say that.

I LOVEEELOVELOVEEE your writing. It's a great perspective on simple things...well...emotionally not so simple things.

that is all.

I'll do it could you do Daddy's story and Daddy's rage plz btw daddy's rage has some grammer issues that the site wont let me fix so im well aware

Could you read

Rotting to the core
and
You were never there

Thank you.

IF you still have time, could you please do:
A Day with Jake
and
Dear Soldier?

Please and thank you!