like dark poetry?

i did one..so could you do the same for me please:)
can you please rate and comment :
"Revenge"
and if you want any other poem..THankyou=]

Please rrc one of mine.

Thnks.

[Of the Dire is the only one I have seemed to place under Dark. I have other poems, they revolve around relationships, but they have a darker feel to them. There is also The Cinema, its a different perspective that I suppose would loosely fit under dark, but I havent read it for a bit.]