new member, need advice :)

hello...I recently submitted five poems--I've always written poetry but never felt confident enough to share any of it...so, I figured this is the place?!? if anyone would comment and rate (I'd prefer comments--constructive criticism perhaps...) my poems I'll reciprocate. I have more poems, but dont' want to post until I receive some feedback! They are all by ivkr81 and here are the titles:

lost in yesterday
to be free
read aloud...unfinished
the light
the one that wasnt

let me know if there are any particular poems you would like comments on if you comment on mine! Thanks a bunch!

I read all of them. They were good. Just work on your structure.

Read which ever you want to of mine.
The only one i have a request for is To Kill a Mockingbird.

Thnks