Two New Poems: [2 for 4]

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    I have two new poems out, both of them are Sonnets, because I've been trying them lately. I would love honest comments, because I want to write better Sonnets. The titles are "Your Life, Your Hands" and "The Boy You Can't Resist". If you read those two poems I will read 4 of yours.

    Thanks.

  • azii
    18 years ago

    Done! :)

    cAN YOU COMMENT ON MY NEWEST ONES, PLEASE? :)

    Oops, caps lock was on.. sorry.. However

    Thanks a lot..
    Take care

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    done

    Please do 4 of your choice.

    thnks

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Thank you to the both of you for reading.. I just finished returning the favours :)