Two New Poems: [2 for 4]

Hey everyone,

I have two new poems out, both of them are Sonnets, because I've been trying them lately. I would love honest comments, because I want to write better Sonnets. The titles are "Your Life, Your Hands" and "The Boy You Can't Resist". If you read those two poems I will read 4 of yours.

Thanks.

Done! :)

cAN YOU COMMENT ON MY NEWEST ONES, PLEASE? :)

Oops, caps lock was on.. sorry.. However

Thanks a lot..
Take care

done

Please do 4 of your choice.

thnks

Thank you to the both of you for reading.. I just finished returning the favours :)