Please comment and rate my new poems!!! ^-^

Please, and i'll rate and comment many of yours!!! ^-^ thank you, domo arigatou, gracias, and che che......

-Liz

I'll do it my latest would be great

Thank you so much, my newest one is the one i would really appreciate you rating and commenting. TYTYTYTY! ^-^

-Liz-

Heya, ill do your latest and a few others. Can you please do any of mine that catch your eye. Much appreciated ~mel

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-Liz-
(same for me)

Heya, Thanks alot for commenting on my poems i really do appreciate it because i had another account where i had 50 poems on it but it got suspended. So this is my new account now and im just starting to repost my poems so they were a few of them. But thanks alot :)

Np, ur on my fave. now..... ^-^

Thanks heaps. same as you on mine :]

I have another poem, im full of emotions right now. ^-^

No offense but i seriously hope all those poems are an embodiment of you because you would have a very sad life.

i don't know, i can't be in your shoes but good night! light your spark, cross the rubicon, draw a line in the sand.

conquer your fears and sadness and use it as a weapon no one can beat. light a candle that no one can smother or conceal.

when life's troubles reaches for you expecting you to roll over and die then pop him in the mouth and yell "i ain't done yet death, let's go another round!"

your servant:
david

I rated and commented on 5 of your poems.
could you please r/r/c on
- His love for her is gone
- painful rumors
- I'm sorry
- The bruises fade
- Satisfaction I'll never give you

Please & thank you.

I rrc "my tomb", excellent poem btw, can you rrc "Every Spring"

thanx