New poem

  • StefQ
    18 years ago

    Well after like a year not writing, at least not much i wrote another poem, i'm not sure if it's good or not so please comment and i'll do the same :) and if you think it's bad tell me what is and how i can improve.

    the poem's name is : "Every Spring"

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Will do will you plz do my new one thx!

  • Melpomene
    18 years ago

    Heya, ill do this can you please do my latest poem thanks alot ~mel

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Done.
    Please do Dig my grave [Parquette] thank you.

  • StefQ
    18 years ago

    All done :) all great poems :)

  • ~*SugarCube*~
    18 years ago

    I rated and commented on your poem.
    could you do
    - The bruises fade

  • Independence Forever
    18 years ago

    My comment says my thoughts on the poem

    your servant:
    david

  • StefQ
    18 years ago

    Done all of them :) any more?