Master, I Obey [[3.for.5]]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    These are rather long, but please tell me what you think.
    I'll do 3 for 5.
    LEAVE TITLES.
    No love or friendship! [I can't comment.]
    I leave long, honest critics!
    NO ONE LINERS! I'll kill you! [Lol.]

    And have fun!
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    01.Master, I Obey {CinqTriosDecaLa}
    02. She's A Mess Of Insecurities {Trijan Refrain}
    03. Broken Stars {La'Tuin}

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I'm not that bad/hated, am I? =//

  • KaKaSHi
    18 years ago

    No....im sure ur not...
    but u saying they're long isnt "encouraging" for the reader
    and 3 for 5.....could be a good deal....but many readers can't be bothered to read 3...
    just like me...
    ill read 1...or 2...
    depends how long
    =]

  • Brigitte
    18 years ago

    Done....lol some people are just afraid of long poems... they just want to read a short poem say somthing about it and then get their's done. lol don't worry about it, I loved reading your work and commenting. When you find the time you can comment me back, thanks

  • XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX
    18 years ago

    Done! They weren't really that awful long...they were worth the read anyways...i'm not sure which ones of mine you've read...so do these if you haven't...
    *the Hellion Becometh
    *Wrong Again
    *Forget them
    *Loosing our own Battle
    *Beauty of the roses
    Thanx
    Jonda Beth

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Okay, done.
    Great Poems, btw. :]]

    Could you comment:
    01. Amazing Grace.
    02. My Mother.
    03. For Every Heartbeat.
    04. Passed us By.
    05. Amazing Love.

    Thanks. :]
    -Teria.

  • LockedInEternity
    18 years ago

    Okay well i only had time to comment and rate one poem..but it was absolutly amazing...so all i ask for is one poem commented and rated in return:

    "Insane"
    thankyou

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    "they just want to read a short poem say somthing about it and then get their's done"
    ^^^
    That's all they want . . . some don't even read it and leave "grate job! 5/5" [Yes, I spelled that wrong for the point.]
    Many on this site just don't care about poetry anymore . . . =/ So sad...

    Nirvanic Sonneteer--
    You can't be "bothered" ... Wow.
    Oh, and leave titles if you want comments back, please. =]

    Brigitte--
    Could you please leave titles? I really don't have the time to look =/. Busy, busy, busy!

    Everyone Else --
    The ones that said "Master, I Obey" was a bit fuzzy, I went and put a meaning to the top. Hope it makes sense. =]
    And thank you sooo much for the beautiful, well thought out comments. I'm glad you enjoyed them; that just lifts my day. =]
    Oh, and I'll get to these asap, have no fear! I have work every day this week and tons of homework lately [getting ready for finals] and other obligations, but I assure you, I WILL do them. =] Thanks for understanding.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Britt--
    Aweee thank you soo much for the kind, loving comments! They flatter me ... =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Jonda Beth --
    You're done.
    I was going to nominate one of your poems, but it won't let me for some reason. I'll keep trying. =]

    Everyone else--
    Hang in there, I'll get all these soon. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Teria--
    I've done yours. I hope you don't mind the extra comment. =]

    I only have one more to do ... the rest of you that don't have comments yet [save one person] PLEASE LEAVE TITLES. =[ Please.

    Thank you.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex