Newest Poem {double}

  • Brigitte
    18 years ago

    I'll do 2 for you if your read/comment/vote my newest poem "Stupid little girl" I'd really like some honest feedback... I don't mind if it's harsh... If you don't like the poem tell me so. I won't hold it against you. PLEASE no one liners.. I promise to give honest feeback on yours. If you feel like doing other poems thats fine, I'll still double what you do. But thats the main one I'd like done. Thanks so much

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Done. Good poem.

    Please do:
    -Dig my grave [Parquette]
    -I need you
    Thank you.

  • LockedInEternity
    18 years ago

    Done:)
    can you please comment and rate:
    "Insane"
    &&
    "It's Funny"

    thankyou...and feel free to do more if you like the poems...lol

  • Brigitte
    18 years ago

    Okay I finished with "deadly loves" I'll get to the next poster (sorry I'm really bad with remembering names) as soon as possible. Probably tonight I just have to go do the dishes, and to answer the second posters question. In the one line "Eyes of adam" I was simply refering to a different way of saying "Human eyes" "mans eyes"

  • Brigitte
    18 years ago

    Okay finished. By the way "my love 4 you is endless" I loved your poems. I added you to my faverotes list. Anyone else?

  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    Done brigitte
    Could you please do?
    -You don't know me
    -You'll begin where i end

    Thanks alot
    Take care
    Laura

  • Brigitte
    18 years ago

    Done, I love your topic choices laura! Anyone else?