New poem

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I have written another one. It is What you asked for.
    If you could r/r/c this one I would appercaite it, I think it is missing something, And i need some feedback. As always I will return the favor. I will do two of your If you do this one for me. Leave titles for me to read, and they will get done, just as soon as I can. At least leve a post telling me you did it, so I will remeber who to r/r/c in return. Thanks And please don't forget to vote.

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    It is o.k everyone has problems where they can't always veiw explict poems, but I will still r/r/c any poems you want done.

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    Could you comment on 'Never Wake'? I'll read yours even though im not supposed to :) lol

  • Michael D Nalley
    18 years ago

    Inspired poet
    Razor Blade

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    Done and done.

    anyone else I am bored.

  • Melpomene
    18 years ago

    Heya, I think you've done all my poems on this account because i only have 3. But thats fine i'm bored too. So i'll r/r/c It now. =)