No Longer Can I Plea

Anyone want to give me their honest, honest opinion of this poem. I wrote it a couple of days ago, but kinda curious if it is even any good, I have a few other poems posted, you are welcome to read if you want to that is., I'll return the favor. Thanks.
-Ally

I liked your poems very much

Was the title "A plea for help"...I couldn't seem to find a poem titled 'no longer can I plea"
Well anyways if I did the right one...the only thing wrong with it was the flow...so I gave it 4...

Sorry about not getting back with you two sooner. The poem was that one.. I had two titles and forgot that I had settled on "A Plea for Help" thanks for commenting on it, and I will get to commenting on yours. Thanks agian.
-Ally

I commented on "A Plea for Help".. you can do any poem you want for mine.. Thanks