Comment the person above you!

Leave a poem that you want to get commented, and give a comment to the person above you!
Only one poem at a time though, make it fair.
And no one-liners! Be honest, its time to help someone get better at writing!

To start it off,
please read:
The end

//ahh/// this is a wonderful dealio <3

Done!

Can the person below me do Paradise??

Will do =)

Can the person below me do

"The heart of the ocean"

I will do it =)
to the person below me do, slowly killing me, but I love you (lento)

Consider it done! Can the next person do "Life May Have Been Beautiful". Thanks!

:)

Done! I loved it! =)

To the person below me.. You can do any poem that catches your eye, it would be appreciated. Thanks. =)
~Ally~