I need feedback

  • Marcus
    18 years ago

    I just wrote a poem about some girl
    I need some feedback on it
    its called Can't Deny It No Longer

    if you help me out and give me feedback I'll definitly try to return the favor when I can ASAP

    thanks in advance

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  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Ill check it out. please read teh collab.

    thnks.

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  • Marcus
    18 years ago

    I did dear gravestone
    i really enjoyed it

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  • Marcus
    18 years ago

    I did vietnam sky for you
    that was an enjoyable read also

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  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Thnks. great poem yourself. good luck with the girl =]

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  • Marcus
    18 years ago

    Lol thanks ^_^

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  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Will you do

    The Wizard
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=903164

    Please and thank you :]

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  • Robert
    18 years ago

    Please comment and vote on this poem

    Grow A Pair

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  • Bloomed Rose
    18 years ago

    Hey, no problem

    just read one of my featured poems, or my newest one. thanks, I appriciate it. and ill check out your poem right now.
    rose<@>

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  • Marcus
    18 years ago

    Thanks to you all
    I did all of your request

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  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    Done Do u think u could
    read my latest one t5he scent of sex and sweat
    Or whatever catches your eye thanks

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  • Marcus
    18 years ago

    Ok thanks
    did urs!

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  • xxSnow Angelxx
    18 years ago

    Done!=)
    very cute work=D

    Could u do my latest one please..thankyou

    xxPoojaxx

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