1 for 3 :) Fair and Square

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    I have written the second part of my sad poem called Incomplete without you ( Part II).

    I would appreciate comments and ratings on this piece and I will return the favour on 3 poems of yours. Leave titles or just let me rrc poems which suit my taste. By the way every type suits my taste :)

    No one liners and plse do vote. Those who havent checked Part I, If you do it I will rrc a bonus poem.

    With love
    Fsams

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Hello poets where are you??? I am eagerly waiting just for your feedback :)

  • Melpomene
    18 years ago

    Done. =) Please do my latest ad any others that catch your eye. Thanks alot~mel

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Sure slave!!!

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Slave its done!! Any one else???

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Hello poets.. where are you all???

  • Sweet lig
    18 years ago

    Done! part 1 and 2 they are great!

    i just wanted u to do my 4 oldest poems

    thanks and god bless

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Sweet its done :)

  • LuvLyLynn
    18 years ago

    Hello hope its not to late ^_^ i'll do 1 & 2 for ya...

    plz r/c/c:
    my pain
    paradise
    you, me and this....

    plz and thanx yaz...

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Synthetic its your turn now I have done your poems. :)

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Yeah all done!! Any one else??

  • Boy
    18 years ago

    That was nice poem done plz

    "i was alone in your city"
    "will i always love you"?

    any other whihc cath your attention
    plz do not orget to rate aswell thax

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Done!! ny one else???

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Thanks 4 ur feedback poets. I am really thankful to u all.

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    I am desperate to rrc some more new members poems.

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Is there any one who haven't done yet.