CrazyGoNuts! [[DoubleOrTripleCommets]]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    There are seven poems at the moment (but I may add later more.)
    This will stay open until I'm too busy to complete comments.
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    Rules:
    `Must comment and vote.
    `Must leave a title. (If you don't, I won't bother looking.)
    `No love or friendship. (If you do, I won't comment; I may find a new one or not.)
    `No one liners (if you do, I won't bother commenting back).
    `Enjoy yourself. =]
    `Put "CrazyGoNuts!" somewhere in your post so I know you read everything. =]
    `Tell me how many comments you earned. =]
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    Titles are in order from the ones I want done, and so on. Each poem is worth x ammount of comments (which is decided by how badly I want the poem read).

    Worth 4 comments.
    o1. Ooh! My Soul

    Worth 3 comments.
    o2.The Heroine of Heroin

    Worth 4 comments.
    o3.My Sweet Rose {Acrostic}

    Worth 5 comments. (Want read, but it's rather long.)
    o4. Time Stands Still {Glosa-Verse}

    Worth 3 comments.
    o5. Wishful Thinking {Acrostic}

    Worth 1 comment.
    o6. Jesus To A Child

    Worth 2 comments.
    o7. Crashing And Burning Seems To Be Your New Game

    Worth 5 comments.
    o8. Time Stands Still {Glosa-Verse}

    Thanks for your time!

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

    Comments To Be Given:

    .K.i.T.t.Y
    14. hidden
    15. opened gates
    16. never let go
    17. risk
    18. a sinful slaughter

    Fsams
    o1. That is the deal candy
    o2. Incomplete without you (Part I)
    o3. Incomplete without you (Part II)
    o4. Love is burden
    o5. I am alone
    o6. I love you
    o7. Thank you
    o8. Lost
    o9. I am yours
    10. I will wait for her
    11. Rain
    12. English for the confused
    13.Hey everybody
    14. Conveyance
    15. Can you be mine
    16.Blocked be the way
    17. My teacher
    18. A mournful sonnet
    19. My trusted friend
    20.She hurt me
    21. The thoughtful eyes
    22.Love lasts

  • Zeus
    18 years ago

    I read Time Stands Still, May you please read.

    Look At The World
    WAR!
    Drawn To The Light Like Flies
    Society
    and In The End
    Thanks a lot.

  • Zeus
    18 years ago

    I also did My Sweet Rose
    May you just do

    "Love: A Natural Disaster'

    Its a love/nature mix
    Thanks

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Oh thank you, Sythentic. I'll get on yours asap.

    Jesus, you didn't read all the rules. Sorry. =/.
    However, if you do read all the rules and tell me what you missed, I'll do your poems since you didn't necessiarly leave one liners. =]

    These will be done tonight and hopefully more poems to chose from will be posted!
    Anyone else?

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Hey Sheena. :]

    I'll do all of them.

    Will you do:

    o1. My Give A Damn Ain't Broke.
    o2. Subcortical Dissection.
    o3. Labrynith.
    o4. Sacred Silence.
    o5. Master Of The Mind.
    o6. Parallax Time Stretch [ There's two; whichever you wanna.]
    o7. Pusillanimous Shadows.
    o8. Sweet Sunlight.

    -Whoops had to change them forgot the whole friendship/love thing. Gahhh. Lol.-

    Do Seven of those, since I'm doing seven, please. :]

    Andddd, Anddd, Anddd... They're not too good, for the forwarning. I've been kinda crappy at it lately.
    Lol.

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    I read o7.Crashing And Burning Seems To Be Your New Game last night, so that's 2 comments. I'll go read o4. Time Stands Still {Glosa-Verse}

    So a total of 7 comments. =]

    If you could do:

    Everything's Just Wonderful [Lyrics]
    Once Upon A December
    Thanks For The Memories
    Last Dance
    Never Say Goodbye [Triquatrain]
    Any other 2..

    Most of my poems are love and friendship. Sorry about that. =]]

    <33

    .Ciao.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I'm glad to be getting lots of feedback. Thank you everyone!
    However, some of you boobs (lol) haven't voted.. If you didn't vote, I'd love it if you did, even if it is a three or four (honesty is key!).

    Thank you for all your time.
    My time we'll be devoted to you as soon as I'm unbusy.. Probably tonight or tomorrow night. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    I'm going to read your poems tonight.

    Here are the ones I want you to read.
    .17.
    forever sweet dawn
    fade to sweet slumber
    dawn's youth
    kismet
    counterplay
    vietnam sky
    painted sky
    egami rorrim
    unbound
    pygmy wings
    eternal bliss
    it's time
    stranded with hades
    hidden
    opened gates
    never let go
    risk
    a sinful slaughter

    Thanks a bunch, and I can't wait to read more of your awesome work!

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    CrazyGoNuts! =]

    I reviewed both Acrostic poetry of yours. I hope you'll return the favor this time, considering the fact that you didn't return the favor in the past :|. Oh, well, it's fine... :) Anyway.

    Will you please review the following pieces?
    1. Under The Guise Of Love (Collab)
    2. Temptation's Bait (Reversed Etheree)
    3. Distilled Desire
    4. Satirical Accolade...
    5. Gidson (Acrostic)
    6. Fascination...
    7. Brooding...

    Thank you, darling!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    ^^^
    Didn't I?
    And if you're refering to a post on here, I probably lost it.
    Anyways, if you want since you're comments are actually well thought out I'll do...five? more of yours. Sound fair? =]]
    BUT. I want titles. =]]

    And thank you you two. I'll get to these soon.

    Also. Kitty, you will obviously be the last to recieve comments. =] Hope that's okay.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    No, you didn't. But, like I've said, it's fine. =]

    Anyway, thanks so much! (^^,)

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Haha. No problem.

    =]

    I can't wait.

    AND I LOVE YOUR POEMS.

    IT WAS SO WORTH READING!!!!!!

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    -Save The World
    -Disturbed
    -Living For The Beast
    -Treasure

    I only earned 4 :) I did enjoy reading your poem 'My Sweet Rose'. It was a beautiful poem written to an angst melody

    Oh, yeah, and I need to explain Treasure. I know its under the 'love poem' categorey but it really isn't a love poem. I wrote it because I was looking at a picture of Coretta Scott King at her husband's funeral and I wrote the poem not only because she lost her husband but the world lost a great leader. So...yeah :)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Thank you Kitty! Awe. =]]]

    And Syhn.. I still can't do "Treasure". Thanks for explaining, but if you really want it commented, you'll have to move it to the sad category because my computer won't /allow/ me to comment. It's not because I don't want to, it's because I can't. =/. Sorry.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    Okay, done :)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Okay, Jordan's done, but that took me nearly thirty minutes to do. My computer's /seriously/ lacking, so I'm going to try to repair it and come back to comment you guys. It will get done, just have patience (and maybe a prayer for my computer =/).

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    "'CrazyGoNuts!""

    I have done all the poems so you owe total of 22 comments.

    o1. Ooh! My Soul (4)

    o2.The Heroine of Heroin (3)

    o3.My Sweet Rose {Acrostic} (4)

    o4. Time Stands Still {Glosa-Verse} (5)

    o5. Wishful Thinking {Acrostic}(3)

    o6. Jesus To A Child (1)

    o7.Crashing And Burning Seems To Be Your New Game (2)

    So here is the list of poems you can comment. Remember I voted for all 7 poems. tc

    1. That is the deal candy
    2. Incomplete without you (Part I)
    3. Incomplete without you (Part II)
    4. Love is burden
    5. I am alone
    6. I love you
    7. Thank you
    8. Lost
    9. I am yours
    10. I will wait for her
    11. Rain
    12. English for the confused
    13.Hey everybody
    14. Conveyance
    15. Can you be mine
    16.Blocked be the way
    17. My teacher
    18. A mournful sonnet
    19. My trusted friend
    20.She hurt me
    21. The thoughtful eyes
    22.Love lasts

    Hope you would honestly return the favours.

    With love Fsams

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    [[Falls over]]
    F.
    Well.
    I'll get these done.
    But as you can see it's going to take me sometime.
    So, bare with me everyone one! =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I just did Teria and Synh.
    Slowly but surely I'm getting there.
    But remember: Patience is a virtue!

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    How about you contact me when you do get eleven more that aren't love or friendship, alright? =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I am NOT bumping this up to get more people and CERTAINLY not because I'm going to finish these commets.
    [Turns away whistling innocently.]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Okay, I tried, guys.

    I got four out of the seven done for Hunni Bunches of Oats before my computer decided to go realllllll slow.
    So, I'll finish her up when I can and the same for you guys!
    Pray this computer makes it! =///.

    Thanks for your patience.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    I hate when my computer acts real slow. Take your time, I'm in no rush. =] I appreciate what you've done so far. =]

    <33

    Ciao

  • Kirsty palmer
    18 years ago

    Hey I commented 'Ooh! my soul'

    could you please comment and rate my four newest poems.

    thanks

    xXx

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    ^^^
    Done with yours.

    Alright. I'm back. I've had a busy week and wasn't able to do this, but I'm here now! Woo! Who's excited?
    Alright. I'm working on the comments now and my computer seems to be happy, so I should get them done unless I fall asleep.
    So.
    This is still open.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Okay, I'm sorry, but I have to head to bed. I'm about to fall asleep now.
    And unless you guys want crap for comments, you'll understand. xD

    Thanks for being patient.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Hope
    18 years ago

    Then I called on Jesus
    Secrets
    Tired and alone
    Liberated - From the advesary
    We wanted
    There is a light in me