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  • tears i cry
    18 years ago

    Can you please R/R/C my poem
    i'm sorry for being who i am
    its not about me but i wrote it as if i was my brother please take a look.
    and leave the names of the ones you want R/R/C

  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    Done.

    Could you please do?
    -He is my kind of rain
    -kissing the lipless
    -I'm Ready
    -Saddened Your Soul
    -Erase My Life As You Erase My Pain

    Thanks alot,
    Laura

  • GretaInsideOut
    18 years ago

    I've done that for you,
    could you please R/R/C

    -Sky of Love
    -Nothing
    -Time
    -Pact suicide. Hate For Life
    -Morbid Melody

    Thankyou
    Greta

  • ECILA ice
    18 years ago

    Hi can u check on my poems..done with yours by the way it's great!
    heres mine:
    *dreamer
    *don't let me fall
    *borrowed time
    *rainbow fades away
    *keep holding on

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Done.. Could you please read.

    1. My One Last Friend
    2. The Missing Piece of my Heart
    3. Together as One
    4. A Paradise in my Heart
    5. My Last Farewell

    Please vote too - I voted.

  • Crystal Gaze
    18 years ago

    Finished.

    Could you please do..

    `My Final Good-Bye

    ` Dream of me

    ` Rainy Day's

    `Man and Wife.

    ` A shower Of Pleasure

    or

    ` Doubted Faith.

    Thanks,
    Elaine.

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    Done.. Great poem i wrote.. :)
    Would you please do
    -alvina marsha (acrostic)
    -marsha (double acrostic)
    you don't have to do the other 3.. :)
    thx..

  • nikki
    18 years ago

    Done, could you please do
    -DEAR DIARY #1
    -DEAR DIARY #2
    -DEAR DIARY #3
    -love again
    -one more night

    p.s- i voted could you please do the same.

  • Rose not your average
    18 years ago

    His forgotten birthday
    looking out the window
    this is what i have become
    car crash
    thinking of you
    thanks

  • claire
    18 years ago

    I loved ur poem - can u pls comment n vote on:
    -the light that is you
    -holding on
    - the contrast
    -when does dawn become day?
    -the dent in my heart
    thanks!

  • Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden
    18 years ago

    It was a good poem.

    Here are the ones I want you to read:
    Live, love, laugh, learn, and then die
    Hide and Seek
    Thoughts of the mindless
    Crime Scene Waltz
    Fire Children or Mentally Impaired either one.

  • luv Shelbz luv
    18 years ago

    Done can u pick mine randomly plz thx

  • BeautifulDisaster
    18 years ago

    Alright ill do your poem.

    please do my 5 newest.

    thank you =]

    Rhonda ELizabeth

  • Catastrophic Beauty
    18 years ago

    Done.

    Can you comment on my five newest ones, please. Thanks.

  • JaMeS
    18 years ago

    Hey i done it commented and rated p.s it was well good!

    can you do

    desire the story part 1
    beginning the story part 2
    this prince
    blinded by her utter beauty
    that one kiss

    pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :):):)

  • Michelle18
    18 years ago

    Done...

    can you comment....

    *desperate bitchin'
    *predictable
    *abandoned angel
    *promise me forever
    *daddy please accept me

    thanx