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Can you please R/R/C my poem
i'm sorry for being who i am
its not about me but i wrote it as if i was my brother please take a look.
and leave the names of the ones you want R/R/C

Done.

Could you please do?
-He is my kind of rain
-kissing the lipless
-I'm Ready
-Saddened Your Soul
-Erase My Life As You Erase My Pain

Thanks alot,
Laura

I've done that for you,
could you please R/R/C

-Sky of Love
-Nothing
-Time
-Pact suicide. Hate For Life
-Morbid Melody

Thankyou
Greta

Hi can u check on my poems..done with yours by the way it's great!
heres mine:
*dreamer
*don't let me fall
*borrowed time
*rainbow fades away
*keep holding on

Done.. Could you please read.

1. My One Last Friend
2. The Missing Piece of my Heart
3. Together as One
4. A Paradise in my Heart
5. My Last Farewell

Please vote too - I voted.

Finished.

Could you please do..

`My Final Good-Bye

` Dream of me

` Rainy Day's

`Man and Wife.

` A shower Of Pleasure

or

` Doubted Faith.

Thanks,
Elaine.

Done.. Great poem i wrote.. :)
Would you please do
-alvina marsha (acrostic)
-marsha (double acrostic)
you don't have to do the other 3.. :)
thx..

Done, could you please do
-DEAR DIARY #1
-DEAR DIARY #2
-DEAR DIARY #3
-love again
-one more night

p.s- i voted could you please do the same.

His forgotten birthday
looking out the window
this is what i have become
car crash
thinking of you
thanks

I loved ur poem - can u pls comment n vote on:
-the light that is you
-holding on
- the contrast
-when does dawn become day?
-the dent in my heart
thanks!

It was a good poem.

Here are the ones I want you to read:
Live, love, laugh, learn, and then die
Hide and Seek
Thoughts of the mindless
Crime Scene Waltz
Fire Children or Mentally Impaired either one.

Done can u pick mine randomly plz thx

Alright ill do your poem.

please do my 5 newest.

thank you =]

Rhonda ELizabeth

Done.

Can you comment on my five newest ones, please. Thanks.

Hey i done it commented and rated p.s it was well good!

can you do

desire the story part 1
beginning the story part 2
this prince
blinded by her utter beauty
that one kiss

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :):):)

Done...

can you comment....

*desperate bitchin'
*predictable
*abandoned angel
*promise me forever
*daddy please accept me

thanx