I'm new, and would like comments

My name is Essence and I would love some comments on my first poem. Its not the first i have written, but it's the first on this site.
I've only just joined and would love to get active on this site.
Please comment "Start of something new"
I will do one of yours too
Love, Essie

You have a lovely name by the way
I will comment on yours now

Let me say Welcome on behalf of those of us here at PnQ. If you have any questions just shhot me a private message and I will try to respond as quickly as possible.

;) k sweetie... Will you please r/r/c
1. Medics Creed

Thanks Babe

--Sher

Thanks Tara, Its unusual but i like it.
Thanks for the comment.
Sherry, I'll do yours now.
Thanks to you too.

Love, Essie

I looked at it. I liked it overall. You can read my latest. If you want to read more just check out any of my favorites, but I would prefer one of the first 6.

Welcome to P&Q lol..prepare to be addicted. Anyways...i commented and voted your poem

could you please do: Absentee

Thanks

My latest ones please
thanks!