The Letter - 1 for 3

I have just written a new poem called The Letter that i'm not sure about i would really like some comments/feedback. I will r/r/c 3 in return, just leave their names.
Thx, DnB

Hey, I'll r/r/c your poem right now and I'd like it if you read "we were just meant to be" "hide and seek" and you can choose any other one for the third. thanks a lot!
Rachel

Hi!
Good day!

I'm done!

can you do,
-hypothesis
-educated parents
-left behind

thanks!

Amazing....
could you please r/r/c
dealing,
living dead, if u havent done it
and this kind of life
thanks in advance

Great poem!!!!!!
Do any that catch your eye

Great poem hun =0) Please comment on:

I give up
The night I fell
Anorexia queen

Thank you =0)

Sorry i took so long, ok, i've done Trying to hold on, Rachel, Veamm and Vanessa. To tyanna and *BleedingAngel* i will get to you soon, i promise.
DnB

Commented and voted. Plse do

1. Oh my angel
2. Ideal master teacher
3. Sex is a boon

Superb poem you have there. You sure have talent.
Could you please do;
- Unsung Hero
- Forever Fading
- Perfect, Yet Deadly Words

Thank you.

Tammie :]

Fantastic.
Please comment and vote on:

~ Lucid Malediction
~ Lament of a Dying Butterfly
~ Where Dead Angels LIe

thanks

Sorry i haven't been on in ages, i have done tyanna and *BleedingAngel*, and am in the process of doing Fsams, Tammie and Sweet Fragility.
DnB

Hi. i'm done. can u please check on mine too??
** i do love you
**walking away
and any poem of your choice.. thanx.

Done Fsams and Tammie.
DnB

Done Sweet Fragility

Hi i read the letter; wot a read i just hope its not too true to ur heart!! i would be grateful if u could do any of mine i would love feedback from such a poet!

Done ICE f0rg0tTeNph0eNix and zeenat. And yes, mostly true to my heart. Always.

Done gack60. Anybody else....?