The Letter - 1 for 3

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    I have just written a new poem called The Letter that i'm not sure about i would really like some comments/feedback. I will r/r/c 3 in return, just leave their names.
    Thx, DnB

  • Rachel
    18 years ago

    Hey, I'll r/r/c your poem right now and I'd like it if you read "we were just meant to be" "hide and seek" and you can choose any other one for the third. thanks a lot!
    Rachel

  • Veamm
    18 years ago

    Hi!
    Good day!

    I'm done!

    can you do,
    -hypothesis
    -educated parents
    -left behind

    thanks!

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    Amazing....
    could you please r/r/c
    dealing,
    living dead, if u havent done it
    and this kind of life
    thanks in advance

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    Great poem!!!!!!
    Do any that catch your eye

  • BleedingAngel
    18 years ago

    Great poem hun =0) Please comment on:

    I give up
    The night I fell
    Anorexia queen

    Thank you =0)

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Sorry i took so long, ok, i've done Trying to hold on, Rachel, Veamm and Vanessa. To tyanna and *BleedingAngel* i will get to you soon, i promise.
    DnB

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Commented and voted. Plse do

    1. Oh my angel
    2. Ideal master teacher
    3. Sex is a boon

  • Tammie
    18 years ago

    Superb poem you have there. You sure have talent.
    Could you please do;
    - Unsung Hero
    - Forever Fading
    - Perfect, Yet Deadly Words

    Thank you.

    Tammie :]

  • Sweet Fragility
    18 years ago

    Fantastic.
    Please comment and vote on:

    ~ Lucid Malediction
    ~ Lament of a Dying Butterfly
    ~ Where Dead Angels LIe

    thanks

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Sorry i haven't been on in ages, i have done tyanna and *BleedingAngel*, and am in the process of doing Fsams, Tammie and Sweet Fragility.
    DnB

  • ECILA ice
    18 years ago

    Hi. i'm done. can u please check on mine too??
    ** i do love you
    **walking away
    and any poem of your choice.. thanx.

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Done Fsams and Tammie.
    DnB

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Done Sweet Fragility

  • gack60
    18 years ago

    Hi i read the letter; wot a read i just hope its not too true to ur heart!! i would be grateful if u could do any of mine i would love feedback from such a poet!

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Done ICE f0rg0tTeNph0eNix and zeenat. And yes, mostly true to my heart. Always.

  • DeadandBleeding
    18 years ago

    Done gack60. Anybody else....?