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It broke her heart
when they went apart

mine

she walked away cryin
and inside she was dyein

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

She got up
she fixed her hair
Then she was on her way
to a beauty show they booed her
of stage she was a huge disgrace......

**I GUESS???**

She started to go crazy,
As everything grew hazy...

>> *shrugs* If it rhymes hey it works..

LMAO!! why did you mess up the poem talkin about poo.. it sounded better when it said she was crying, and something dying.. now somebody fill up the next 2 lines.. lol

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dyeing

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

Do you know how strange this poem is getting? Well done on the originality people, this so ROCKS!

I stuck in a couple of lines, if that's cool with you guys. Here's the whole thing as it seems to be right now;

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dying

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

She hated being laughed at
so she went home to her cat.

Still, the cat smelt the poo
on her clothes and her shoe.
It wondered why she'd pooed herself
and leapt away onto a shelf.

then with a mighty stroke she flung
the poo and in the air it hung

glowing there from in the garden
the devilish boy who did she'll pardon

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dying

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

She hated being laughed at
so she went home to her cat.

Still, the cat smelt the poo
on her clothes and her shoe.

It wondered why she'd pooed herself
and leapt away onto a shelf.

She cried all day and night
just wanting to get out of sight!

Her 4 year old brother chuckled a laugh
and asked "Why don't just take a baff?"

"A bath!" she cried
and to the bath she did stride.

she scraped the poo off her back
and found out it turns black

then with a mighty stroke she flung
the poo and the air it hung

she jumped out of the shower
and noticed on her bed laid a bright red flower.

glowing there from in the garden
the devilish boy who did she'll pardon

He was staring at her from outside,
asking her to be his bride.

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dying

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

She hated being laughed at
so she went home to her cat.

Still, the cat smelt the poo
on her clothes and her shoe.

It wondered why she'd pooed herself
and leapt away onto a shelf.

She cried all day and night
just wanting to get out of sight!

Her 4 year old brother chuckled a laugh
and asked "Why don't just take a baff?"

"A bath!" she cried
and to the bath she did stride.

she scraped the poo off her back
and found out it turns black

then with a mighty stroke she flung
the poo and the air it hung

she jumped out of the shower
and noticed on her bed laid a bright red flower.

glowing there from in the garden
the devilish boy who did she'll pardon

He was staring at her from outside,
asking her to be his bride.

Her face began to turn all red,
Later that night they snuck off to bed.

Falling asleep in his tight embrace,
And then the visions of poo were replaced.

sorry about all of the blank msg

condolences were given later
for the flung poo from the hater

really sorrry about that one, my brain is fried for a while.. just ignore it

Lol, nice poem.

Yeah, interesting is ONE way to put it. I think strange, weird, cool and insane are some others that immediately come to mind.

later on when their eyes met
she noticed his hair was soaking wet
dripping off a browish paste
ppl staring in disgrace

oh how great *rolls eyes.. * blah...i guess it rhymes.. tshall do

cool poem :P

xx emz

lol, this poem is very odd yet funny

they both got up and took a shower
but it took more than an hour

they both cleaned up and washed their hair
to go in public like that they did not dare

all dressed and fancy they went out
the resturant they went had all trout

an interesting place to leave it.....:P

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dying

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

She hated being laughed at
so she went home to her cat.

Still, the cat smelt the poo
on her clothes and her shoe.

It wondered why she'd pooed herself
and leapt away onto a shelf.

She cried all day and night
just wanting to get out of sight!

Her 4 year old brother chuckled a laugh
and asked "Why don't you just take a baff?"

"A bath!" she cried
and to the bath she did stride.

she scraped the poo off her back
and found out it turns black

then with a mighty stroke she flung
the poo and the air it hung

she jumped out of the shower
and noticed on her bed laid a bright red flower.

glowing there from in the garden
the devilish boy who did she'll pardon

He was staring at her from outside,
asking her to be his bride.

Her face began to turn all red,
Later that night they snuck off to bed.

Falling asleep in his tight embrace,
And then the visions of poo were replaced.

condolences were given later
for the flung poo from the hater

She woke up at don
and noticed that he was gone.

She rolled over and saw on the bed
the poo was on the spot where her luv laid his head

later on when their eyes met
she noticed his hair was soaking wet

dripping off a browish paste
ppl staring in disgrace

they both got up and took a shower
but it took more than an hour

they both cleaned up and washed their hair
to go in public like that they did not dare

all dressed and fancy they went out
the resturant they went had all trout

On their dish
lay some fish.

She looks and stares
and she found lil hairs!

She puked on the floor
and ran out the door.

"How could this have happened?
I dont want to be here any more."

She stood outside,
with no self pride

she cried her streaming tears
remembering at once all her fears

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dying

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

She hated being laughed at
so she went home to her cat.

Still, the cat smelt the poo
on her clothes and her shoe.

It wondered why she'd pooed herself
and leapt away onto a shelf.

She cried all day and night
just wanting to get out of sight!

Her 4 year old brother chuckled a laugh
and asked "Why don't you just take a baff?"

"A bath!" she cried
and to the bath she did stride.

she scraped the poo off her back
and found out it turns black

then with a mighty stroke she flung
the poo and the air it hung

she jumped out of the shower
and noticed on her bed laid a bright red flower.

glowing there from in the garden
the devilish boy who did she'll pardon

He was staring at her from outside,
asking her to be his bride.

Her face began to turn all red,
Later that night they snuck off to bed.

Falling asleep in his tight embrace,
And then the visions of poo were replaced.

condolences were given later
for the flung poo from the hater

She woke up at don
and noticed that he was gone.

She rolled over and saw on the bed
the poo was on the spot where her luv laid his head

later on when their eyes met
she noticed his hair was soaking wet

dripping off a browish paste
ppl staring in disgrace

they both got up and took a shower
but it took more than an hour

they both cleaned up and washed their hair
to go in public like that they did not dare

all dressed and fancy they went out
the resturant they went had all trout

On their dish
lay some fish.

She looks and stares
and she found lil hairs!

She puked on the floor
and ran out the door.

"How could this have happened?
I dont want to be here any more."

She stood outside,
with no self pride

she cried her streaming tears
remembering at once all her fears

Her boyfriend slapped her in the face
because she was acting like a big discrace.

So she kicked him in the knee
and then tied him to a tree.

Soon to find out he had mood swings
it began to hurt her feelings

Later that day
she thought she'd look deep into his eyes and say

i'll always love you
even though you kinda smell like dog poo

but what the hey
let's smell like poo everyday!!
haha this poem is SOO funny i laugh haha

Lol. If this keeps going it'll end up being the longest poem EVER. It's still hilarious though.

It broke her heart
when they went apart

She walked away crying
and inside she was dying

she tripped and landed in dog poo
or wait was it poo from the loo

The poo was all over her skirt
don't get me started on what was on her shirt

Brown squirt
on her shirt

Coverd it with dirt
while she claimed she was hurt

She said it was dark
and she tripped in the park
and that was the reason for the little brown mark

She started to go crazy
when everything grew hazy

Her friends laughed at the little brown mark,
that she got from walking down to that park.

She hated being laughed at
so she went home to her cat.

Still, the cat smelt the poo
on her clothes and her shoe.

It wondered why she'd pooed herself
and leapt away onto a shelf.

She cried all day and night
just wanting to get out of sight!

Her 4 year old brother chuckled a laugh
and asked "Why don't you just take a baff?"

"A bath!" she cried
and to the bath she did stride.

she scraped the poo off her back
and found out it turns black

then with a mighty stroke she flung
the poo and the air it hung

she jumped out of the shower
and noticed on her bed laid a bright red flower.

glowing there from in the garden
the devilish boy who did she'll pardon

He was staring at her from outside,
asking her to be his bride.

Her face began to turn all red,
Later that night they snuck off to bed.

Falling asleep in his tight embrace,
And then the visions of poo were replaced.

condolences were given later
for the flung poo from the hater

She woke up at don
and noticed that he was gone.

She rolled over and saw on the bed
the poo was on the spot where her luv laid his head

later on when their eyes met
she noticed his hair was soaking wet

dripping off a browish paste
ppl staring in disgrace

they both got up and took a shower
but it took more than an hour

they both cleaned up and washed their hair
to go in public like that they did not dare

all dressed and fancy they went out
the resturant they went had all trout

On their dish
lay some fish.

She looks and stares
and she found lil hairs!

She puked on the floor
and ran out the door.

"How could this have happened?
I dont want to be here any more."

She stood outside,
with no self pride

she cried her streaming tears
remembering at once all her fears

Her boyfriend slapped her in the face
because she was acting like a big discrace.

So she kicked him in the knee
and then tied him to a tree.

Soon to find out he had mood swings
it began to hurt her feelings

Later that day
she thought she'd look deep into his eyes and say

i'll always love you
even though you kinda smell like dog poo

but what the hey
let's smell like poo everyday!!

and scare your fears away,
its the least i can do,
so pack on some more poo.

The smell of poo filled the air
but neither of em gave a care.

author: River Styx
date: 2005.01.18 21:15

answer
Lol. If this keeps going it'll end up being the longest poem EVER. It's still hilarious """though."""

author: Mandy
date: 2005.01.21 16:16

answer
haha yeah I """know"""

god then killed them both for poo
its atleast of what he could do

for this poem went on too long
now im going off to smoke my bong

wait, i dont smoke, what am i thinking
"sniff" are those cookies baking

i wanted to end this poem and i threw a big fit
come to think of it, i have to go take a sh!t

Hey the word sh*t has to deal with poo
but i think this poem is not through!

this poem will never end
because it is my very best friend
i hope i have a pencil my sister will lend
just as long as it will not bend

But whats the point of ending now
When writing a poem we all know how

you people are all on crack
You need to get your lives back

yes i totally agree
but wait i have to take a pee

This is gettin to wierd
This is exactly what i feared

hey this poem is cool
are you too cool for school?

sometimes I hate that dog!
Jeeze, he just left another log!

(lol, veryvery stupid:S, but i'm just tryin' to go with the whole *poo* concept, lol)

okay now the poo is starting to get old
lets talk about mold!
no mold is not right
mold is what goes bump in the night

lol i dont know! it works

wow! what can i say WOW this poem starts out with a broken heart then the whole thing with poo and the guy and yah then mold not peanutbutter?? what is this world coming to?? hehe just kiddin anyway......

he said mother dear
you bit off half of my ear

okay enough with that
lets get back on track

well okay then jelly bean
I can't beleive what i have seen!