1 for 3 Memories

Hello all,
Please comment and vote for my new poem "Memories".
If you do so, I'll comment and vote for three of your poems.
- Please don't forget to leave titles.
- No one liners
- The deal is active only for that specific poem. All other poems you'll comment and vote for will receive a 1 for 1 deal.

Thanks and have a pleasant read :)

Done!
Instead of Finding Beauty in Negative Spaces (which my browser couldn't show) I did poisoned by an angel - hope it's ok.
Thanks for your comment, changed the poem a bit, hope it's better.
Britt - If you can fix the song, it would be appreciated.

Anyone else?

If you say that it's fine, so I'll keep it that way. Thanks for the help :)

DONE!

PLS rrc my 3 latests poem thanks alot!

Done! put the song under love poems as you suggested. Thanks!
Zeenat - Done! One of the more talented poets here
Thanks all!

If anyone has an idea for the last stanza here, let me know.

Anyone else?

Any three all critique is welcome. I'm kinda new at poetry, but don't hold back on your critique to be nice.

Done!!! Plse do'

1. Ideal master teacher
2. Lost
3. English for the confused

If you have alreay done any of these plse pick your choice :) and vote as well. I voted :)

tc
Fsams

Rins Puppy Dog - you didn't comment and vote for my poem. You need to do that first.

Fsams - again thanks, my loyal commenter :) You are probably the most talented poet here...

Commented and voted for all!

Anyone else?