1 for 4 any poem (First 20 people)

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Comment any of my newer poems that catches your eye, I shall do four of your's.

    BUT LEAVE ME A ONE LINER AND I WONT REPLY TO ANY OF YOUR'S!

    And no, two one liners wont satisfy me either.

    Don't know what to say? Tell me what you liked and disliked, what I'm doing wrong and right, how it can be improved and why etc.

    If you leave something along the lines of "this is full of emotion, I feel it, really liked this, great job here" I will class that as a one liner.

    It's called constructive criticism...I can handle it, so be HONEST.

    Also, if you can't handle constructive criticism, then don't bother because I refuse to leave a comment saying anything other than what I think.

    Leave titles or links, or I wont do them.

    Thank you.

    Have a nice day.

    xx

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Done.
    Please do:
    1-"Too Lost In You"
    2-"If This World Were Mine"
    3-"Sweet Love"
    4-"Join Me"

    Thanks in advance.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    Passion The Rose Left Behind

  • Navy SweetHeart
    17 years ago

    I have read to of your poems so far they are so amazing... I plan to read more because I love you work!

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=921645

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=797352

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=722371

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=694438

  • Fluffy
    17 years ago

    Hello, dear.

    Would you please read:
    1. Time
    2. Humanity
    3. Liar
    4. One of his own.

    I would greatly appreciate it. :)

  • The Herald
    17 years ago

    Dracula and any sad poems plz

  • unknown
    17 years ago

    I did "never felt this way before"
    if i deserve to get comments in return, would you please do any of my featured? thx.. ^^

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Did "Pen Pain", I tried to be as honest as I could...
    Please comment and vote for my following:
    - I love you
    - Memories
    - What would I do without you?
    - The Embodiment of True Love

    Thanks and have a pleasant read :)

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Oh how nice to see that you guys actually read ALL of my original post and understood what i expected in a decent comment. i'm happy :) now, i'm pressed for time today as i have to pick my sister up from school shortly so if i don't have these done today, i'll have them finished tomorrow. thanks in advance for patience.

  • ihrtschlepper
    17 years ago

    1) hate, due to you
    2) Soon
    3 & 4- youre pick
    *smiles*

  • ihrtschlepper
    17 years ago

    Wait, can you do my new one, the enemy?
    thanks, i love ya so much,
    sammie

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Okay guys, i know i said i'd have these done by now, but a couple things happened recently and i'm now on my way to the hospital. i usually leave quite long and detailed comments but i'm currently finding it somewhat painful to type. i haven't forgotten about this. i'll get to them in due course. just, give me time okay? thank you. x

  • FridusBlueheaven
    17 years ago

    Done with yours!!!

    Please do:

    "Little Lady Love"
    "Bucket Of Roses"
    "The Sojourner"
    "Color Of Life"

    Or if you've done with those, please anything that catches your eye!!!

    Thanks before

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Hey guys, i'm feeling somewhat better now so i'll be getting to these tomorrow or tuesday hopefully. thank you again for patience.

  • ABake
    17 years ago

    If this is still open, I will do it =]
    If you could please r/r/c-
    Our Love Faded Along With The Streetlights
    Temporary Pain Killer
    Your Lies Only Fool My Heart Tonight

    Please and thanks ahead of time.
    && I hope you feel better sweetheart.

    Amber...

  • Sweet lig
    17 years ago

    Ok i will read it now....

  • Sweet lig
    17 years ago

    Well DONE!

    PLS RRC my 4 latest poems
    thanks alot

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    MOnStRiiToS pRiiNcEsS-your poems are done

    zeenat-your poems are done

    emma-your poems are done

    bahamianpoet-your poems are done

    RoadandtheRadio-your poems are done

    lost soul-your poems are done

    Paddy-your poems are done

    restlefan-your poems are done

    I will continue these tomorrow.

    Six more people and then I'm closing this down.

    Thank you again for patience.
    xx

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Now the site's back up again, i will be finishing these within the next few days.