~NEW POEMS~4 FOR 10~

Hey I have new poems and I was wondering if any of you can read, rate, and ccomment the 6 of them and I will read, rate, and ccomment 15 of yours. Oh, and please, no one-liners or two liners. Tell me exactly what you think about it or I won't return the favor.

The new poems are:
"Too Lost In You"
"If This World Were Mine"
"Join Me"
"Sweet Love"
"The Pain of Losing You"
"Brown Eyed Girl"

Please leave titles.

Thanks in advance.

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Ok will do so now.

Please do my latest and any others which catch your eye.

Thanks alot. ~Mel

SlaveToTheMusic is done.

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I just updated the post.

Anyone want to read, rate, and comment my newest 6 poems for 15 of yours?

I just read them and left my comments. You seem to enjoy writing poems about the one you love (I do too).

Hope my comments are not mean, just shared some thoughts.

Keep writing.

Justsaygoodbye, I love the comment you left me. I love long poems because they help me write better. Thanks!!!

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I commentd them all... you have a really good voice and i love how they sounded.
can you comment some of my poems, like
the enemy
hate, due to you
also anything else you wan.
thanks! its appreciated!!!!!!!

Romantic lover is done.

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Thanks!!!!!

Ihrtschlepper is done. Your poems are great!!

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Done.
Could you please do...

` Bitter Like Rain
`A Frozen Paradise
`An Emotional Storm
`A Wilting Rose
`Lyrical Poison
`A Poem To Her Beloved
`A Not So Pretty Ending
`The Dawn Of Love
`Venting
`Venting Take 2

Please Vote,
Thanks,
--Elly.

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Done I did two.
Could you please do
"Wrapped Up"
"The Story in Her Eyes"
"Dreams Made a Reality"
"I Want You to Need Me"
thanks :]

AblissfulDREAMER is done.

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