I'll read and comment

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Just say you would like me to read them and I will read them! I will vote and comment on the ones I like. =)

  • SCARECROW
    20 years ago

    Be cool if you could check out some of my stuff. I'll return the favour, so please and thank you!

  • lisa marie
    20 years ago

    i'd like it if you read some of my stuff.

  • Kara !
    20 years ago

    I'd love you to read any of my poems. Thank you.

    ^_^

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    can you read some of mine please? Thanks so much!

  • Sinister Soire
    20 years ago

    could you read my conspiracy theory.. ill read more of yours in return

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    Yea it would be greatly appreciated if you did read some of mine and vote ... the favor will of course be returned

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    ALRIGHT! I read, commented and voted on everyones poems. =) Well not every single poem.

  • BrokenMisery
    20 years ago

    if you could read mine, id like that, if you don't have time though, don't worry about it....
    (and i'm going to return the favor now lol, even if you don't have time)
    take care, thank you greatly
    kt

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Alrighty, checked all of the poems you guys have too! This is fun, I would love to read more poems =)

  • 3oe
    20 years ago

    please read some of mine ive posted some new ones...thanks i'll vote on yours and comment

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    I voted and commented on all your new ones =)

  • 3oe
    20 years ago

    thank you so much
    ive voted and commented on some of yours too.

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    I see! Thank you very much! But I have a question for all of you who say my rhyming throws you off.. what do you mean by that?

  • Lydia O
    20 years ago

    Erica, I can't speak for others. But using your poem Wounded Heard as an example, I personally liked the rhyming scheme you used. I thought that the rhythmic flow of the poem might be improved with more uniform line length.

    Question: 3rd line. Was the word "down" supposed to have been "drown" in reference to your opening line?

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    thanks and i will always comment and vote for youself also

  • SCARECROW
    20 years ago

    Thanks for checking out my stuff. *v*

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    Had very little feed back on any of my latest stuff, so if you could, would you please take a look at mine. Thank you.

  • Janice Brown~©~
    20 years ago

    if you could please read and comment on my poems i will be eternally grateful and i will do the same
    luv ya
    xoxox

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Well folks I checked all your poems! You all are very talented! Great work =)

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Sure I love a good comment.. or a bad one. Ha. I'll be sure to check out your other poems too!

  • Lydia O
    20 years ago

    Thanks, Erica, for taking the time to read and comment on my poems.
    --Lydia

  • Jennifer Fox or Jackson
    20 years ago

    can you read my lastest poem called, "Insane!"...it'd mean alot to me if you could...thank-you....jen

  • Fireflower
    20 years ago

    could you read some of mine please? that would be great!

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Phew! Took awhile but I did it! I checked all of your poems. Keep on sending in more and I will be sure to look at a few more. Take care!

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Come on people! I'd like to get more people =)

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    I already read yours o.o;; lol anyone else have any requests?

  • Ð맆îñ¥
    20 years ago

    Culd ya read my natural habitat, it hasn't been received too well so any feeback is welcome.

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Read it and many others, you are very talented. Keep on writing. Infact I added you to my favorites.

  • Rachele
    20 years ago

    can u read all my poem please please please ill read yours

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Sure thing. I have a song stuck in my head:
    "Nobody does it better"
    Nobody does it better
    Makes me feel sad for the rest
    Nobody does it half as good as you
    Baby, you're the best

    I wasn't looking but somehow you found me
    It tried to hide from your love light
    But like Heaven above me
    The spy who loved me
    Is keeping all my secrets safe tonight... o.o;;

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Who knows who sang that?

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Obviously not.. and now I'm talking to myself.
    TIME TO SING QUEEN!!!!!!!
    Tonight I'm gonna have myself,
    A real good time,
    I feel alive ive ive,
    And the world turn it inside out,
    And float it around in ectasy.
    So don't stop me now,
    Don't stop me.
    Cause I'm havin a good time
    HAVIN' A GOOD TIME!

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Sure thing toots.

  • Erica Brown©
    20 years ago

    Yeah people!
    I'm still ready to check any poems so keep in touch.
    And I would really appreciate it if you took a look at my poem called "Hear my call (revised)" because apparently my friend entered it into a contest..I'll get her back.. haha. Well every vote and comment matters. I'll be sure to look at yours.
    Take care.

  • Scarlette
    20 years ago

    You can read any one of my poems. I'd prefer you comment on Caspian Sea, Human & Satan's Prayer, if you like them ;)

    Thank you for offering.

  • WhiSperNcUrsIVe
    20 years ago

    I would love for you to read my poems...they arent that great but I enjoy what I write...but please take a look at "Untitled" and please comment and vote!

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    yea could you please check out some of mine

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Please read my poem A cyber love (not cyber trap)