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  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Okay. So I'm bored.
    Give me some things to comment.
    This won't be open for very long so take advantage.
    It can't be VERY long
    anddd.. Up to 2 per person. :]

    Also, if you WOULD LIKE to return the favor you could comment on "Don't forget your mine [You promised me forever]

    But, again.. You don't have to :]

    ALSO: MUST LEAVE TITLES OR YOU DON'T GET ANY

    except for the person below me because, lol.. I just edited this :]

    REMINDER: YOU MUSTTTTT MUST MUST!!! LEAVE TITLES. OR I WILL NOT DO ANY OF YOURS!

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    17 years ago

    Hey could you do any of my two! I will definitely go check your poem out, probably read two lol

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Okay, Done hun :]

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    "Looking in the Eyes of Love"
    "I Want You, I Need You, I Love You"
    thanks :]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Get to those in a bit..s orry, not feeling too good
    but i promise i wil

  • Anonymous
    17 years ago

    Any of my featured, thanks! i'll return the favor =)

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Method in the Madness please.
    Thanks very much. :)

  • jason
    17 years ago

    Umm i do not know if you are still doing this, but would you read my poem titled

    empty

    thank you

    its not my best and i havnt written in awhile so yeah

    Thank you very much

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Guys.. I'm sooooo sorry!!
    Yes; it's still open!

    and yes, I PROMISE to get to these.

    I had a pretty bad day ;/ so I'm not feeling quite up for reading right now..

    Will do all of these in the morning. :]

    Again, sorry for the delay!

  • Christina
    17 years ago

    Heyy can you read my most recent

    WHERE HAVE YOU GONE!! thx...and i promise ill check urs out!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    OKAY. I PROMISE PROMISE PROMISE I'll do these sometime today. Like I said, I had a badd day yesterday so I wasn't really up to it. And I'm going to the dentist not long from now.. So I'll have to comment all of these when I get back from the dentist :]

    But you have my word that I'll do them!

    Keep enteringggg.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    "Monochrome Scenery"
    and
    "Identity Crisis"

    I'll gladly return the favor :)

  • xxTaegan Emilyxx
    17 years ago

    I already did that poem u asked :] i think o_O
    ill make sure lol
    could you do
    "waiting for you; Michael </3"
    &
    "The hardest thing to do"

    Thanks
    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Can you please do:

    Christmas Morning (Song)
    A Bundle Of Love (Collab)

    Thank you in advance, Joe

  • Anonymous
    17 years ago

    I have one poem, entitled "Niggaaa Please", it could offend, but please try and understand the message.
    I'll read yours, if you're not up to reading mine, then that's okay.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    AblissfulDREAMER, did both of yours :]

    NOTE: I'm very sorry for the delay. I have a rough past two days lol. Yesterday was a bad day && then, today I had to go to the dentist & got major surgery done, so I'm in a lot of pain. Plus, they just made me give my dog away.. So I'm very upset atm. But, I feel bad for making you guys wait so long! So, I'm doing the best I can do get to every one of you. Like I said though, You WILL get yours done. I promise.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    EvenifyourvoiceShAkEs, done with yours!
    let me know if you decided to edit them & I'll re-comment :]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Josh, you didn't gimme titles like I asked ;/
    But I still did one of yours. It was good. If I have time;; I'll do more!

    BUT PEOPLE MAKE SURE TO LEAVE TITLES! NEXT TIME.. I won't do yours!

  • Riley
    17 years ago

    Ohkay, how about, Shining Star
    and Death by Media.
    Those are my newer ones ;)
    one of my only non-love poems

    I might return favor if I have time... thanx ;)

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    XxTaegan Emilyxx, I already did your Michael poem the other day.. But I did the other one you requested :]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    HALF WAY THROUGH!
    Got most of them... Do the rest later or tomorrow :]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Okay. I think I got everyone!

    Oh and Anonymous, I think I did like three of yours

    Finally all caught up! I hope I didn't miss anyone.

  • jLegendc
    17 years ago

    Hey.. r u still commenting poems? can u try to read mine? can u read "ALL THIS TIME" and "THE DEFINITION OF THE WORD PROMISE?" plz