New Poems! 1 for 3

Can anyone please help out with my 5 new poems? Please no one/ two liners. Tell me exactly what you think.

Here are the new poem:

"Take My Hand, Love My Soul"
"Please Come Back"
"Shiny Night"
"Our Song" &
"Trapped"

*PLEASE LEAVE TITLES*

.:CiNdY:.

I read a couple...

i only have like 5 i think so any two will do! :) actually.....can you do RAIN DONT LAST FOREVER && ARGUING WITH ME

:)
MAHALO!

I'll do it...=)!!

Can you r/r/c any three of mines please and thank you!!

Hawaiizang3l & SociopathicLips are done.

Anyone else?

Youngflo is done.

Anyone else?

^ all right Adam, enjoy your lust for food. =P

I read all 5 I think. Hope my coments helped.
read any of mine that catch your eye...

Did: "Take My Hand, Love My Soul"

Please do my latest three.

Thanks and have a pleasant read