Comments - Fart is an art

Nirvanic Sonneteer ( F C D ) at 2007-06-05

Haha!
funny poem! &original...sure made me smile!
=]
great ring to it...
only one place i thought could be different

The way you fart
Is a style and art

maybe if it were

The way you fart
Is a piece of art

the flow would be better...
but a 5/5 for sure...

Aidhaan ( F C ) at 2007-06-05

Lol I cant stop guffawing its so funny. Really outstanding. Beautiful rhymes. 5/5 doubtlessly

Silent Dreams Untouched ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-05

Lol very funny and original! Never would've guessed that fart is an art lol. Anyways well done on this!

Startle Me ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-05

Your first stanza?
Hillarious and a bit gross.
I could actually smell it, EWWW!
But still, your last line
On the first stanza?
It seemd really forced.
You should change it.
Even though it is quite funny.
It ruins the point of poetry if the flow is bad.

Some resist the power
I laugh an hour
Others guffaw longer
Many run in anger

Really forced in my eyes.
I have to admit.
It's quite funny.
But it's just didn't flow that well..
4/5?

Kiss me Kill me ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-05

Wow, that was funny. Good poem too. Thanks for the comment you left on my poem.
5/5
Ravyn

silence ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-06

Cute poem :)

Lost in the Ocean ( F P C ) at 2007-06-06

OH MY GOD!! THIS IS SO FUNNY!!

*Isolde* ( F C D ) at 2007-06-07

Oh my god..that was great. Im bouncing of the walls over here...wow 5/5 great job

Black Princess ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-07

Hahahahahaha poo hahaha i love that word lol, so funny well done. I do agree it seemed abit forced at one point but still very good poem. 5/5

ImNotPerfect20 ( F C D ) at 2007-06-07

This is funny.. Cheered me up right away i have been feeling down lately. anyway i thought you did an awesome job on this. It flowed really great.. 5/5

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

"Along with an awsome smell" (sic) (= Awesome is misspelled in the line.)

Reading this piece amuses me. It, indeed, was relatively entertaining, and didn't fail to give me a smile. =) Nice work, nonetheless. 5/5

Marian

MezmeRyz ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

The way you fart
Is a style and art
So when you fart
Be cool and smart
^^^ my favorite stanza!! lol it was sooo funny! definately made me smile..hard! lol good flow and rhyme over all
..nuff luv xx

claire ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-09

Lol~ this is seriously hilarious!!

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-10

LMAO

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-10

I had reread and reviewed it in response to your request. Heh. =)

It remains an amusing piece, nonetheless. Keep writing humourous poems and take care.

Ecupidmo at 2007-06-12

Hey! you sure got me cracking..!!
this poem is smelling hilarious!!
the flow was good IT WAS HILARIOUS!!
good one here..LOVE it...!

you got a good rhythm,i gotta admit..!

Vanessa ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-17

This was funny *rolls on the floor laughing
The subject alone isn't something widely done
*crying from laughing so hard the flow was good, the rhymes were great and thehumor clear. 5/5 *sides hurt frim laughing so much

RETARTED GHOST ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-18

Haha!!!!
this made me laugh
it was so funny
i just love this stanza

The way you fart
Is a style and art
So when you fart
Be cool and smart


oh great one.
lol
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Robert ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-19

This is a good poem, but I don't think you really brought the reader in, I mean what I saw there was no hook to the poem, nothing to draw the reader to read on, just a thought Plot121

Mo ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-21

HAHAHA - came in here to read another poem and couldn't resist opening this one! Hahaha - I am such a toilet humour person. I love talking about farts and I love hearing them even more! My husband can fart and I laugh for ages and then when I calm down, I think about it again and I laugh for even longer!!!

Hahahaa


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