Weather

by Manders

Weather the weather is cold or
weather the weather is hot
we'll be together whatever the weather
weather you like it or not!

 

Submission date : 2006-04-04
Last edit : 2006-05-17

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Cathrine ( C D ) at 2006-04-04

I think it should have ended in somethign that rhymed with cold, not 'weather you like it or not'

Jaime ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-05

^I was going to say something like that. But if you just switch around the first two lines it will rhyme, plus it's a pretty cool tongue twister.
Also, watch out for your spelling. The very first word should be "Whether" not "weather".
Just work at it, it's really good already.