Submission date : 2006-04-04
Last edit : 2006-05-17
Cathrine ( C D )
I think it should have ended in somethign that rhymed with cold, not 'weather you like it or not'
Jaime ( F P C D )
^I was going to say something like that. But if you just switch around the first two lines it will rhyme, plus it's a pretty cool tongue twister.
Also, watch out for your spelling. The very first word should be "Whether" not "weather".
Just work at it, it's really good already.