Strawberry Shortcake

by FridusBlueheaven

Title : Strawberry Shortcake
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Strawberry shortcake,
I can't resist the heaven taste inside you
Red charming fruit, what a beautiful view
Creamy white, never thought I was in blue
Tasteful cake, the magic was really true

Strawberry shortcake,
My tongue wants you for several more plate
That some says I will be too damn overweight
But I'm looking for another color, well I can't wait
Your lovely taste has overshadowed every hate

Strawberry shortcake,
I'd love to have another tea to accompany
To eat those creamy creatures, that's my duty
You're irreplaceable, you cream is so frosty
Bet you're the only thing could understand me

Strawberry shortcake,
Your creamy tartar is somewhat purely white
The sweetness when I was all alone in the night
The silence heart when I was so out of sight
Your taste will always be my magical light

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

 

Submission date : 2007-12-29

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sexyproudmommy ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-31

This waS such a cute poem. i havent tried to write a funny one yet. but i liked this 5/5

mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-31

Wow, this was such a funny poem =]
It was absolutely amazing.
Great job!
5/5

*Cindy*

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2008-01-04

YumYum. It makes me want to go out and eat me some strawberry shortcake! I loved the imagery and how the food makes you feel. It was beautiful. It was refreshing to read something different and all in all it just made me smile. Well done *5/5*

Nelle ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Haha that was cute. i've never seen a poem like that, i can honestly say. great job.

SouthernxCharm ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Haha..wow makes me hungry
for some cake. Lol although it was
a funny poem it stil was really well
written :)
5/5
<3tay



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