Visions of Courage (Tanka)

by Baby Rainbow   Jun 4, 2015


A whispering kiss
lands inside my gloomy heart
as my future sends
visions of desire and strength
to replace my lost courage.

Saffie
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  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I love the flow and meaning of this poem. Its hard to get away from a pattern of negative thoughts when we feel lost. But here you swung it around of sorts and turned the negative into a positive thing overall. The first line tells me that soneone that you have loved is inside of your heart and that with the memories that linger there it gives you a lot of courage to move on. They want you to move on it seems. And you are right it takes a ton of courage to be able to move on and it seems like you have done well here, 5/5