Commercial Masks of the World

by KeyxMashingxParody   Jul 12, 2007


We wander lifelessly through the world,
Lying through our commercial mask.
Being someone we never were,
Always bringing up situations in the past.

We all want pity, attention, commercial,
To be noticed by those we don't know.
Sharing our masks to the world,
Never learning how to just say no.

Peer pressure, isn't real,
It's just all in our heads.
If someone said go jump off a cliff,
You know that you'd be dead.

How can we just flash our fake faces,
And trick people into doing stupid stuff.
Things that are meaningless,
To much is never enough!?

Such lies through our commercial masks,
Such stories I've heard through my years.
How come all of these stories I know of,
All ended in a hurt heart and tears.

We wander lifelessly through the world,
Lying through our commercial mask.
Being someone we never were,
Always bringing up situations in the past.

-Liz-

Yet another I didn't want to post that much, but my friends think it's true, so I should. So here ya go, let me know what you think.
Thx.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hope

    This poem is beautiful, it is well written. I especially loved the way in which it flows and you know what? most of your readers will love this poem because its contents is indeed true. So keep up the good work.
    "Being someone we never were,
    Always bringing up situations in the past.
    "5/5 great Job

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I think this is the type of poem that people everywhere should read because it's one people seriously need to think about! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is really true, i like how you used the first stanza also as the last, the flow was pretty good as well, very honest and straight forward
    5/5 girl!
    gabriella